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Topic: Just wanted to ask a readers prespective,
Posted: 25 May 2017 14:27

I had an idea for a character name that involves a lady, The name I choose to go with was two options. The first one was Shawna I dunno if I spelled it right, give me a little credit. The second name I came up with was. Sasha, I was told that the name Sasha can be mistaken for a male since it is originally a Russian name, I though some ladies Liked the name Sasha since it's different and unique. So would most people take Sasha for a guy more than a girl?

Topic: Which kind of Point of View would I need to use?
Posted: 21 May 2017 01:05

Thank you, you've all been a good help. I wanted to ask about an idea I had in my head, I did have an opinion when I asked a friend about it, wanted to get a second opinion from readers or story mods whoever sees this. I wanted one of my stories to take a dark turn or twist involving abuse. No, not sexual abuse more like physical. I'll give you an example; like bruises scratches on the arm, or a black eye. I was not sure if I could write that in my story. Since is kind of touchy to some people. I won't write how it happens, just mention the bruises, scratches, etc. I know you have to be careful writing about stories like that on here. I'm not sure if stories containing a little violence is okay. Even though I was told I could write about anything I wanted. with a few limits like age and other things. I still wanted to be sure.

Topic: Which kind of Point of View would I need to use?
Posted: 13 May 2017 04:52

Instead of describing what's happening in a story, could I have a story based on character dialogue, naughty, sex scene. I don't always want to base a story of what's happening, So what kind point of view would you recommend? I tend to stick with what works. It is the third person point of view. Is it possible to mix third person point of view and first person point of view? I heard someone tell me that if I did it, would mess up the story. I started with the third person but not sure if I should switch to the First person for a certain part. Just so i get it right when a character is talking in a story do I always have to space it to a new paragraph? I know it starts with this " and ends with " I seen some stories you didn;t really need to space it when a character is speaking in the story.

Topic: would it be alright?
Posted: 06 May 2017 11:17

I have been wrestling with the idea, of doing a story based on Harem type story. I am sure you know where I am going with this. I am a long time anime/manga fan and I always wanted to write a story based on a harem for here but, I am not sure If I am allowed to do one like that. I mean i was told I can write anything I want. Just want to double check or make sure.

Topic: Do most Authors find it hard to write the Intimate/Sex scenes in a story?
Posted: 20 Dec 2016 12:15

I do not know if some of you, have the same trouble as I do sometimes. I do find it easier telling a story from anything else like, describing what's happening in the story, what the character is thinking that sort of thing. But, when it does come time for doing a pleasure scene or doing sex or intimate scene I usually freeze up or mess it up. I try to be particular as I can. Just so I'll know what some mods would look for in a sex scene? I'm asking these I am still a Rookie writer. I don't think anything is wrong with asking these questions, is it? Like it is easier doing sex part when you are playing with someone on here in black box chat or private chat. You don't have to worry too much. But when I do a sex scene in a story you have to be very careful and delicate with it.

( p.s I'm not being very particular right now with my grammar, so I hope some of you know what I'm asking or saying.)

Topic: Where would you like to be right now?
Posted: 13 Dec 2016 10:03

Hm Having a couple of moonshine with Vanessa26, driving her nuts a little. teasing her with my legs, Right Vanessa Sama:D Hm, what else Poking Mrs_gurantee's Forehead Uchiha style, Oh yeah and I'd do the same to Vanessa26 too like this..

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dkrUnM3WUyg watch at the 0:55 mark and watch from here 2:40 to 2:47 (that kind of forehead poke)

Topic: I want to get this from a stranger's prespective am I a fool/idoit
Posted: 13 Dec 2016 05:28

To be honest, I don't think what anyone says here is going to affect you at all. You're going to make your own decision and that's fine. You're soft, you're naive, you're the victim, it's all good. Don't blame yourself, blame the woman you've never met. An online relationship is ONLINE. Who knows, you'll probably be chatting to her again tomorrow (considering how sweet you are) and I really couldn't care less.

All I want to know, is how does someone miss a birthday three times a day? Genuinely, I don't understand what that means. Do you have three birthdays all on the same day?

All the while I've known her, each time my bday falls on nov 21th, she's never been around, it was always some excuse, had work, travel, or needed time to herself, family member ill or she was ill. I could understand the work travel part, sure some all need a break from being online. This place would drive you fucking crazy, pardon my french. Plus it would of been the thought that counted, even if she had to come on for 5 or 10 mins, just say happy bday would of been enough for me.

Topic: I want to get this from a stranger's prespective am I a fool/idoit
Posted: 12 Dec 2016 09:00

If I may ask, what exactly are you accusing her of? And which promise(s) has she made that she didn't keep? You don't even mention any sort of clear relationship that was ever established between the two of you, you simply present her as a girl that you've 'known' for 4 years. Because quite frankly, I fail to see how she's been any dishonest or two-faced: from your own description, she actually seems to have been pretty consistent in the way that she behaved toward you.

A cyber-friend unwilling to engage into anything more serious than a vague cyber-friendship isn't her manipulating you; it's you having inflated expectations and fooling your very own self. And considering how so exceedingly you seem attached to her and how you're refusing to let her go, you can't exactly blame her for still being part of your life and messing around with your head; you're likely the only person to blame for that.

You see, I'm the kind of guy who's not exactly afraid of presenting things for what they are. You'll certainly receive a few responses that will be quite a bit more comforting than my own, but it's unlikely that they'll do much more than validating you as a victim and perpetuating your torments. You've quite literally wasted some of the best years of your life building expectations over something that's not even tangible, I can't say I'm particularly thrilled to assist you in prolonging any of that.

So, here's me once again exposing myself as an asshole and yet possibly giving you one of the best advices you'll ever receive on the matter:

Move the fuck on with your life.

Of course, guys would never understand They can just shrug things off like nothing. Name one time someone meant something to you. Also, I have moved on thank you very much, for being such a prick.

Topic: I want to get this from a stranger's prespective am I a fool/idoit
Posted: 11 Dec 2016 10:03

Lexis are bad news. trust me on this. <img src="/forum/images/emoticons/my2cents.gif" alt="My 2 cents">

Honestly I didn't think she was the type to do it, I heard the stories about her from a mutual friend but. I guess I wanted to see for myself I was just blinded by the way i felt about her i guess. I was too soft or weak to catch on.

Topic: I want to get this from a stranger's prespective am I a fool/idoit
Posted: 11 Dec 2016 09:47

Err... <img src="/forum/images/emoticons/eusa_shhh.gif" alt="Shhh"> ... nope, neither. I guess that part of my life must still be ahead of me.

Anyway, since you've figured out now that she's been manipulating you, I'm sure you'll be extra cautious/skeptical when interacting with her from now on, right?

Oh, you got that right I'd be running away in the other direction. What does piss me off about it, is.. that she was doing it for 4 years and I couldn't see past our bond I had with her.. Always giving her the benefit of doubt. If that makes me a Naive person, and trusting my instincts then I don't know what else I can say or do. It isn't easy cutting a bond with someone like that for 4 years, or maybe longer.

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