About cethpada

Biography

Have been reading the stories for a long time now but have now taken the plunge and write some of my own. As with all good stories those I publish will be partly fantasy and partly based on things that my wife and I have experience in recent years as we have become more open in our sexual adventures

Name:
cethpada
Sex:
Male 
Age:
47
Sign:
Sagittarius
Relationship Status:
Married
Orientation:
Straight
Location:
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23 Aug 2017 00:12
Interests:
History from all era's and around the globe. I am male so it goes without saying that I have a keen interest in sport, love to watch basketball and used to be a very good runner. On the flip side I love shopping and according to my wife am a dream to go clothes shopping with.
Favorite Books:
Decided that the books I list here are books which have had an impact on me. Goodbye to All That, Lord of the Rings, Catch-22, 1984, The Blooding, Flashman, Time Travellers wife.
Favorite Authors:
I read loads from many different authors but a particular favourite of mine is the sadly late Terry Pratchett.
Favorite Movies:
Love the Pixar films (we are all children at heart) and enjoy the odd action movie. Not a fan of horror seen enough blood and guts whilst being scared to death in real life without including it in my leisure time. Finally hello to Jason Isaacs.
Favourite TV Shows:
Too many to list but currently enjoying Modern Family. Band of brothers deserves a mention as it brings back personal memories.
Favorite Music:
I have a varied taste in music but Snow Patrol, Kaiser Chiefs, Muse are all currently on my generic fruit based device.

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Topic: All Dialogue - Advice Needed
Posted: 15 Jul 2017 15:49



Stories that are entirely dialog-driven can be very effective. I've never written one which was all dialog, although I have written some which rely heavily on it to move the story forward. Of course, I've also never managed to write anything as short as 1,000 words. <img src="/forum/images/emoticons/embarassed.gif" alt="Embarassed">

I'm not sure how you could effectively do 1,000 words with no dialog tags or attribution at all; I'd almost have to see it to understand what you're trying to accomplish. You don't need them every line, of course (please don't!) or even every time you change speakers, but as it goes back and forth for that long it seems like the reader will lose track at some point unless some characteristic of the dialog/speech itself defines the character.

An interesting concept, but to me it seems like you'd need something , at least occasionally, to avoid confusion. As an author, you know that the constant 'he said'/'she said' repetition is painfully redundant, and you know to use alternative devices such as 'He nodded...', or 'She shrugged, smiling...', or "He sighed heavily before replying...' or more complex forms to define the speaker for the reader. There are many, many ways to do that.

Still, might be interesting to give it a try. Thinking a little outside the box can produce some intriguing results.



It was just a silly humorous idea which came to me one evening as I was driving home from work. Part of the idea is that at the start you don't know what these characters are and the reveal happens as the conversation goes on.

Topic: All Dialogue - Advice Needed
Posted: 15 Jul 2017 15:39



Is it possible to follow the story without attributives?. Wouldn't I get the conversation mixed up at times without the insertion of at least some attributes?. <img src="/forum/images/emoticons/dontknow.gif" alt="dontknow">
I have read stories where attributes are inserted at certain times just to help a reader keep 'on track'. But I don't have a definitive answer to your question. Hope you find a solution that satisfies without spoiling.

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That is exactly my point when I wrote it I used a different coloured font to keep me on track as even I was finding it difficult ensuring that the response was in keeping with the way I had developed the character.

Topic: All Dialogue - Advice Needed
Posted: 15 Jul 2017 11:01

I have written a very short story, 2 pages about 1000 words. The trouble is it is in the form of a conversation between two characters, I am not sure how to present it. I don't want to include attributives as they would spoil the flow.

Topic: 50 Shades of?
Posted: 21 Jun 2017 22:47

Fifty shades of tea

Topic: In which person do you prefer to read or write?
Posted: 21 Jun 2017 22:43

Today mostly in the 3rd person although the last story was in the 1st person as it was the story of our first swingers meet. Might try 2nd person at some point but guess it depends on whether the narrative requires it.

Topic: Do guys like it when a woman wears lingerie?
Posted: 18 Jun 2017 13:24

Absolutely love to see a woman in nice lingerie.

Topic: Do guys like hearing sexual talk or sexual stories from girls?
Posted: 18 Jun 2017 13:23

Yes, it can be a big turn on if done right.

Topic: Would you ever go to a sex club?
Posted: 02 Apr 2017 02:03

Yes, we go two or three times a year. Every evening is different, sometimes we play sometimes we just sit and chat to others. Clubs are what you make them.

Topic: Would you slip into bed naked with the person above you?
Posted: 01 Apr 2017 11:21

Absolutely

Topic: Have you ever walked in on your girlfriend or wife having sex?
Posted: 01 Apr 2017 07:57

We were at a house party and eventually an orgy developed in one room. When I finished realised my wife was not in the room, found her in another room with a guy from a couple we had swapped with many times. I stayed to watched it was extremely arousing to watch him pound her. It sounds strange but I had not actually properly watched her getting fucked before because I was usually busy myself.

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Servants

“Shush, Be quiet, its opening” “We know, we can all see the light, do you think we are stupid or something, you always tell us to be quiet, it is exactly like the other week when the great portal opened you told us to be quiet then as well and…..” “Will you just shut up, for crying out loud let’s see what she wants.” “Do you think she will choose me? it has been ages since I was...

Added 23 Jul 2017 | Category Humor | Votes 1 | Avg Score 5 | Views 723 | 1 Comment

Sex In The City - Chapter 7

“I do hope we don’t bump into anyone,” said Alice as they got ready to leave the apartment. “Why? We will be okay, it is only down a couple of floors,” replied Charles. “I know, but you are dressed in a tuxedo and I have a bloody long coat on; if we bump into anybody who knows us they will wonder why, when we are not even leaving the block, we are dressed like we are,“ said Alice, looking...

Added 11 Jul 2017 | Category Novels | Votes 3 | Avg Score 4.67 | Views 722

Our First Time

We are used to reading the stories on here about couples first times at clubs or meeting others and they always seem to have been the perfect meet. Here is our story of our first meet. We had discussed for many years, our fantasies about swinging and having sex with other people, but had never felt ready to make the next step. On a lovely Sunday morning in August we decided to take a...

Added 18 Jun 2017 | Category Humor | Votes 6 | Avg Score 4 | Views 2,636 | 2 Comments

Sex in the City - Chapter 6

It was the morning after the night before and Charles and Alice were both strangely quiet about the party they had attended. Both of them wanted to discuss it, but neither wanted to be the first to bring it up. Eventually, Charles felt that they couldn’t avoid it any longer and having made them both a coffee he tentatively broached the subject. “Alice, what did you think about last night,...

Added 15 Jun 2017 | Category Novels | Votes 3 | Avg Score 4.67 | Views 1,036 | 1 Comment

Sex in the City - Chapter 5

The invites popped into Charles and Alice’s inbox the following Monday, inviting them to the first fantasy party the following Saturday. “It says, 'Dress as sexy as you dare.' What do you think that means?” said Alice. “Well, for men, I guess it is just a choice of whether I wear trousers and a shirt or jeans and a shirt. There aren’t really that many options, not sure about what you...

Added 14 May 2017 | Category Novels | Votes 3 | Avg Score 4.67 | Views 1,222 | 1 Comment

Night Out

She was confident, She was wild, She was beautiful, She was wild.   We talked, We clicked, We danced, We kissed.   There was hunger, There was desire, There was passion, There was desire.   But, There were complications, We had others, She was gone....

Added 05 Apr 2017 | Category Love Poems | Votes 3 | Avg Score 4 | Views 332 | 2 Comments

Sex in the City - Chapter 4

Charles woke up the next morning and turned to look at Alice; she was already awake and lying on her side looking at Charles. “What?” “I couldn’t sleep, I have been thinking,” said Alice. “Serious things?” asked Charles. Alice nodded “About last night by any chance?” Alice nodded again. “Guess we need to talk about it,” muttered Charles. “Do you want to discuss it now or shall we get...

Added 29 Mar 2017 | Category Novels | Votes 2 | Avg Score 5 | Views 1,626

Sex In The City - Chapter 3

Robert stood up and started to clear away the plates whilst Catherine moved back into the kitchen to finish off the cooking and start serving up. “Do you want a hand?” asked Alice. “No, no, you stay seated; it won’t take long to plate up, Robert will help. Besides which, you are our guest tonight,” replied Catherine Charles watched her arse as she turned and walked into the kitchen,...

Added 05 Mar 2017 | Category Novels | Votes 3 | Avg Score 4.67 | Views 1,602 | 1 Comment

Sex in the City - Chapter 2

The next few weeks were spent straightening out the apartment and going to work. Neither Alice or Charles saw many of the other occupants of the block and when they did it was in the underground car park as people went to and from work. They bumped into Catherine and Robert a few times and met the other two couples who lived in the apartments on their floor. The other couples were Michael...

Added 22 Feb 2017 | Category Novels | Votes 4 | Avg Score 4.75 | Views 1,761 | 2 Comments

Sex in the City - Chapter 1

A new neighborhood Alice looked up at the apartment block and smiled before turning back to Charles, “Well we had better get started, it is going to be a long day moving everything in. I still think we should have paid to have a removal company shift our stuff rather than doing it ourselves”. Charles scowled, “I know but we have saved ourselves a fortune which is a good thing considering...

Added 02 Feb 2017 | Category Novels | Votes 3 | Avg Score 4.67 | Views 2,194 | 1 Comment

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