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Topic: Help needed (STILL)
Posted: 12 Mar 2017 04:35

Thank you for replying, I've gone over one particular story three times and submitted it three times, it has still been rejected,
I really don't know what else to do with it other than just give up!
As for punctuation not being hard, well probably not, but I'm seventy now and very likely I'm loathe to learn new tricks.
I'd be really grateful were you to look over the story for me, but if not, I'm grateful anyway for your interest.

Topic: Help needed (STILL)
Posted: 09 Mar 2017 19:56

Hi, thanks for replying,
My punctuation skills are almost non existent.

Topic: Help needed (STILL)
Posted: 09 Mar 2017 12:01

I have about half a million, well, I have a few anyway!

Topic: Help needed
Posted: 05 Mar 2017 10:42

I am a prolific author but I badly need an editor, I have two stories awaiting publication on here,
is anyone willing to assist me?

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A Casualty of War: 3rd and Final

When we'd finished laughing, we pulled her into bed and she fell asleep between us. "Daddy, Teddy hasn't got a tooth brush." "Wha...?" I opened my eyes and looked into my daughter's big blue eyes. "He needs a tooth brush, daddy." "We'll buy him one, darling, after breakfast." Laura spoke from where she sat at the dressing table, fully dressed and looking gorgeous, "Poppy, go into your...

Added 24 May 2017 | Category Historical | Votes 5 | Avg Score 4.6 | Views 689 | 4 Comments

Annie And I - Chapter 8 (final)

Frank and I insisted that the girls slow down. Their pregnancy announcements had stunned us both, especially Frank because he was forty-six and Nancy thirty-five. Annie suggested that Julie could be asked to join the team. She was working as a hairdressing apprentice for about four pounds a week and wasn't enjoying it in the slightest. At home that night, Annie rang her and asked her to...

Added 22 May 2017 | Category Love Stories | Votes 3 | Avg Score 5 | Views 879 | 1 Comment

A Casualty of War 2

I awoke just before lunch time the following day, I'd slept for about fourteen hours, I found my old dressing gown on the wardrobe door and slipped it on before going downstairs. Laura was sitting at the table in the kitchen talking to her parents, they all looked up and her dad smiled. "Hya Frank, I take it you needed a good nights sleep." "Yeah, I didn't realise I was so tired." ...

Added 21 May 2017 | Category Historical | Votes 6 | Avg Score 4.83 | Views 1,524 | 3 Comments

A New Life

I opened my eyes and looked at the travel clock beside the bed, it was nine o’clock and it was a new day, a great new day, the first day of the rest of my life! Ringing down to room service I asked for breakfast to be sent up and went in the shower while I was waiting, like everything else in the hotel, the shower was perfect, as were the big fluffy towels and the lovely white bath robe...

Added 20 May 2017 | Category Love Stories | Votes 8 | Avg Score 4.63 | Views 2,421 | 3 Comments

Annie and I, the early days, chapter 7

The first two boats were being delivered to Shardlow and I was up early and on site when the trucks pulled in. I flagged down the first truck and told him where to go, but he seemed reluctant to obey my instruction. “Reckon I'll wait for the gaffer," he said moodily, so I went to the second driver and repeated what I'd told the first trucker. "Why isn't he going first?" “Oh, I think he...

Added 19 May 2017 | Category Love Stories | Votes 2 | Avg Score 5 | Views 911 | 1 Comment

How I Met Melissa

I could feel myself glowing as we walked hand in hand into the dining room for breakfast and wondered if people knew I'd spent most of the night making love with the beautiful, and very self assured young woman on my arm. I'd woken at first light to find her propped up on one elbow looking at me and smiling. "Hi," I said softly and touched a hand gently to her cheek, "You're looking at me?"...

Added 18 May 2017 | Category Lesbian | Votes 4 | Avg Score 5 | Views 3,041 | 1 Comment

How I met Melissa 2

My tongue left a wet trail across her throat as I sought out the hollow of her other armpit, she shivered with pleasure as I sucked at the tangy flesh I found there. "Oh God Jackie," she gasped and leaned back against the wall. I slid my tongue, slavering wetly down to her breasts and sucked at each swollen nipple in turn before carrying on down over her stomach. Her panties were...

Added 17 May 2017 | Category Lesbian | Votes 5 | Avg Score 5 | Views 2,393 | 4 Comments

How i met Melissa

  Chapter 1 It had been a long and frustrating day at my stand in the vast exhibition hall, lots of enquiries but not one firm order! I'd counted at least fourteen invitations to dinner, twelve requests for a drink that evening and at least two blatant, "come with me and I'll show you a good time." offers. I'd responded to the second one from a middle aged man with a paunch that...

Added 16 May 2017 | Category Lesbian | Votes 4 | Avg Score 4 | Views 2,587 | 3 Comments

At College with Suzy

I was nervous as I looked at the board telling us who was roomed with who, it was our first day at college and we were all looking forward to the life of a student. I'd never been away from home before except on holiday or at boarding school, so it was with some trepidation that I followed the signs to room E2, the one I'd been allocated along with someone called Suzy Nicholls. I followed...

Added 15 May 2017 | Category Lesbian | Votes 2 | Avg Score 5 | Views 4,599 | 2 Comments

The Love of my Life

"You're looking at me." she said softly and smiled as she stepped out of her little white panties. "I am, you're right," I laughed, "I'm looking at your pussy." "Well you shouldn't." "If you don't want me to look, why are you here on a private balcony with me, and why have you just taken your panties off?" "I want to get an all over tan." "Ok," I laughed as she lay down on the towel,...

Added 14 May 2017 | Category Love Stories | Votes 2 | Avg Score 5 | Views 956

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