About Eager

I ended up here by chance, and read many wonderful stories. I then decided to try writing some myself. I think the best things in life are love and friends. I do care of them so much I would give anything for a friend. I'm on the side "few friends but good friends", so I will gladly add whoever ask to, and also I will easily remove whoever is only looking for a +1 in friend counter. If you don't care of my friendship, don't ask to me to care of yours either.

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Topic: Staff member needed for questions please
Posted: 07 Nov 2015 12:30

Hi, I need a read proofer / story approver to ask a few questions about something I'm writing in my new story.
I am not sure it could be accepted, and I want to know from a member of the staff.
Can you please contact me?
Thank you.

Topic: Looking for help for my (rejected) first story...
Posted: 06 Nov 2011 15:15

I have pm'd you just in case you still want help.

Best regards and good luck.


Thank You :)

Topic: Looking for help for my (rejected) first story...
Posted: 06 Nov 2011 15:14

I have to say, based on your original post, you seem reasonably competent with the English language. Certainly I have seen stories posted with worse grammar/spelling.

It's lovely to see someone so keen (or "eager") to make a good contribution to the site.

Thank you :)
I'm flattered :P

Topic: Looking for help for my (rejected) first story...
Posted: 06 Nov 2011 08:33

Thank You, NaughtyAnn.

PM replyed, email sent.

And thank you moderator, who kindly answered and explained what was wrong In my story.
Sadly my english skill are not enough to understand how to correct it. Embarassed
Looking forward for the kind help of NaughtyAnn. Thank You again ;)

Topic: Looking for help for my (rejected) first story...
Posted: 05 Nov 2011 23:34

I had my first story rejected, with the reason:

"Story doesn't meet our quality standards. Please consider posting a request for proofreading and editing assistance in our Writer's Resources forum. Thank you. "

Since It is my first story ever and more than this it is in a - for me - foreing language, the rejection was something I considered possible and of course perfectly acceptable. The challenge is thrilling.
The problem is I can't understand what was wrong with it, since "quality standards" is quite a wide range of things.
Is it written with a poor grammar? Did I use wrong terms? Is it too fast, too slow, too soft, too hard? Is it tiring to read? Is the punctuation too heavy or too rare? Etc... Etc...
I don't know.

So, I'm here asking is there someone so gentle and sweet who would help me to understand, so I could correct the story and make it better? Or who could help a little in writing it better?
I would change everything needed to let the story at least acceptable :)

Thank You in advance :)

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Payback pt4

Chapter six: Revenge needs preparation and trusted friends My sleep wasn’t troubled, despite a few little pains here and there in my bruised body. In the morning I woke up alone in bed. I was about to call when Daisy entered the room with a tray, helped me to sit with my back on the headboard, and put the tray on my lap so that I could eat my breakfast. “Normally we are not allowed to...

Added 27 Nov 2015 | Category Lesbian | Votes 1 | Avg Score 5 | Views 644

Payback pt3

Chapter five: Getting to know each other better I don’t know how long I stayed in bed, unable to drift into sleep and rest a little. The fact that I couldn’t move into a more comfortable position wasn’t helping either. In the faint light I could see Daisy keeping a watch on me from where she was sat. “Daisy” I called. “Yes Mistress?” “Don’t call me Mistress, please, I am not one....

Added 25 Nov 2015 | Category Lesbian | Votes 2 | Avg Score 4.5 | Views 1,141 | 2 Comments

Payback pt2

Chapter three: new friends and views of life. After a couple of hours of computer work in the afternoon there was a knock on my door which relieved me from my concentration. I answered the door where a maid was asking if I needed anything. She was young, 5’5” in height, black hair in a loose ponytail and black eyes, her outfit a simple black silk apron, barely covering her shaven pussy...

Added 17 Nov 2015 | Category Lesbian | Votes 4 | Avg Score 4 | Views 2,297

Payback pt1

Introduction A few of these characters can be found in my previous story “A New Start”. Chapter One: Background My name is Sonja and I am thirty years old. Although I am fairly average, my best assets are my long straight black hair and blue eyes. My body is fairly average. I am not a stunning beauty and neither a woman who makes heads turn. I think that my main qualities are my...

Added 12 Nov 2015 | Category BDSM | Votes 5 | Avg Score 4 | Views 2,622 | 6 Comments

A new start. The love story of a sub pt7

********** Thank again for the priceless help of NaughtyAnn. I suggest to read the previous parts before this. ********** I was standing there in the slave position and I had taken her request as a test on my will power. Also I was strong in my determination to stay there without making a move. The time passed and, after several hours, my legs began to go numb. Thinking to myself that...

Added 12 Dec 2011 | Category Love Stories | Votes 6 | Avg Score 5 | Views 3,683 | 6 Comments

A new start: The love story of a sub pt6

Thank you NaughtyAnn, for your priceless help. I suggest you read the previous parts first. Any comment is greatly appreciated. Over the next few months ourrelationship grew stronger. Mistress Serena took me several times to the Club; and also she wasn't using the blindfold on me anymore. Gradually I learnt the route to the club and what street it was in. A couple of times she told...

Added 07 Dec 2011 | Category Lesbian | Votes 8 | Avg Score 5 | Views 3,209 | 4 Comments

A new start. The love story of a sub pt5

Thank to NaughtyAnn for her priceless help. I suggest to read the previous parts before this. Comments greatly appreciated. One week passed by and Serena could tell that I had regained my strength. In fact I was fully recovered and I felt that it was time to pay my respects again to Mistress and her role. Also I wanted to show her how grateful I was for having her look after me in...

Added 30 Nov 2011 | Category Lesbian | Votes 8 | Avg Score 4.75 | Views 2,600 | 5 Comments

A new start. The love story of a sub pt4

Thanks to the priceless help of NaughtyAnn. ************ I suggest the reading of the previous parts. Comments are greatly appreciated. ************ Thenext morning I woke up before my Mistress did, it was one of those rare occasions when she stayed at my place and slept with me. I quietly moved down the bed, checked if my collar was in the right place, took a glance...

Added 29 Nov 2011 | Category Lesbian | Votes 7 | Avg Score 5 | Views 2,519 | 2 Comments

A new start. The love story of a sub pt3

Thanks, as always, to NaughtyAnn, for her help and support.  I suggest you to read the previous two parts before to read this one. Comments are strongly appreciated. ********* So, as the months continued, I received punishment and humiliation for my mistakes and also for my unworthiness. I concentrated totally on learning everything as fast as I could, not for me, but to let...

Added 26 Nov 2011 | Category Group Sex | Votes 5 | Avg Score 5 | Views 2,859

A new start. The love story of a sub pt2

This is the second part of my story. I suggest to read the first part before to read this. My full gratitude again to NaughtyAnn for her help and readproof. I couldn't have done it alone! The next day was Saturday and the weekend had started, so I stayed in bed longer that morning as I was puzzled about my feelings. I thought about the man at the club who had been rude to me, initially,...

Added 20 Nov 2011 | Category Lesbian | Votes 10 | Avg Score 5 | Views 4,634 | 2 Comments

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