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Posted: Saturday, July 27, 2013 7:57:10 AM

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Hummingbirds flutter
My gaze darts from eyes to mouth
Your words on my tongue
adagio_sabadicus
Posted: Saturday, July 27, 2013 9:23:17 AM

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There are those (many) on Lush who wouldn't no Haiku from a can of Bud Lite. Fantastic question; bad place to ask it.

The floating of the down
From soaring geese
Caresses the tension of mind and spirit
Mazza
Posted: Saturday, July 27, 2013 9:28:35 AM

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Sitting beside you
I'm holding your hand in mine
I love the closeness
LauraLee_sugah
Posted: Saturday, July 27, 2013 11:18:57 AM

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adagio wrote:
There are those (many) on Lush who wouldn't no Haiku from a can of Bud Lite. Fantastic question; bad place to ask it.

The floating of the down
From soaring geese
Caresses the tension of mind and spirit




adagio, let those of us who enjoy the pattern use it for our heart words. we are well aware that this is not traditional. i notice you have used a different pattern. it is beautiful and traditional and i will not chide you for being different.

LauraLee_sugah
Posted: Saturday, July 27, 2013 11:30:25 AM

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i long for your time
and crave the ink of your words
to mark my soft heart.

LauraLee_sugah
Posted: Saturday, July 27, 2013 4:40:08 PM

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sitting at the shop
listening to words float on...
kites not meant for me.

Guest
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 4:18:23 AM

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adagio wrote:
There are those (many) on Lush who wouldn't no Haiku from a can of Bud Lite. Fantastic question; bad place to ask it.

The floating of the down
From soaring geese
Caresses the tension of mind and spirit



'no' should be spelled 'know'.
There are some, (many), on Lush who would happily explain the difference to you.
Meanwhile, enjoy your beer.
Guest
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 5:46:45 AM

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adagio wrote:
There are those (many) on Lush who wouldn't no Haiku from a can of Bud Lite. Fantastic question; bad place to ask it.

The floating of the down
From soaring geese
Caresses the tension of mind and spirit


Isn't Haiku supposed to be syllables of

5
7
5? Just asking


Guest
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 5:54:47 AM

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Knowing the difference
Between your homophone's is
A good skill to have.

clown
Dani
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 9:02:08 AM

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Haiku posted here
Are for fun and not much else
Why so serious?



Guest
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 10:15:59 AM

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She's so beautiful
Needs a gentleman to love
Has she found him yet?
Guest
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 10:19:28 AM

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Big mouthed smart arses
They blow air out of their arse
Makes me laugh out loud.

fart



Dani
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 10:19:57 AM

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So unfortunate
To have such a tiny fuse
On a site for fun

Loosen up a bit
It really does one no good
To be so uptight

Boo hoo!

Haiku is easy
Sometimes it doesn't make sense
Refrigerator



Guest
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 10:26:04 AM

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Lush haiku are fun
And you can make them filthy.
Mud. Pigs roll in it.
sprite
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 10:44:09 AM

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words can be petty
or they can lift you up high
silence takes effort


Live, love, laugh.
Guest
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 10:49:46 AM

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All are entitled
To tranquility and peace
Please try it, it's free.
Dani
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 10:51:04 AM

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These poems are a way
To get the juices flowing
No, not THOSE juices. Embarassed



sprite
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 10:59:08 AM

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i am neither brave
nor loyal when shadows strike
the moon judges me

Live, love, laugh.
Dani
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 11:03:13 AM

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The moon judges you?
Like with a robe and gavel?
That's so effing cool!



Guest
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 11:04:44 AM

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sprite wrote:
i am neither brave
nor loyal when shadows strike
the moon judges me



Angels sit atop
Moonbeams smiling down on you,
The loyal and brave.




sprite
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 11:06:31 AM

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i am the new moon
i thump penguin wranglers hard
with hammer and rock

Live, love, laugh.
Guest
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 11:06:59 AM

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I know you don't like
Unicorns and shit like that
Should I send faeries?
Dani
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 11:09:54 AM

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New Moon like Twilight?
Those stories by Steph Myers?
My penguins rule all.



sprite
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 11:15:49 AM

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twilight makes me sigh
not the good kind, it's painful
vampires sparkle?

Live, love, laugh.
Saga
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 12:10:09 PM

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The softness of rain,
Lingers on my wanton skin
Soothes my ache inside.




https://www.lushstories.com/stories/reluctance/broken-glass.aspx
sprite
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 1:53:38 PM

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campfire marshmallows
a good friend to name stars with
today is perfect.

Live, love, laugh.
LauraLee_sugah
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 2:35:59 PM

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your soft voice lingers.
my heart grieves in the new day
your absence miles deep.

Guest
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 4:30:00 PM

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Love spat on your face
Poor dry incapable heart
Too blind to see it
Guest
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 4:51:54 PM

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slipperywhenwet2012 wrote:


Haiku is easy
Sometimes it doesn't make sense
Refrigerator


Now THIS is frigging poetry!
Guest
Posted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013 4:52:57 PM

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Saga wrote:
The softness of rain,
Lingers on my wanton skin
Soothes my ache inside.



..and this is delicate and very nice
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