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Posted: Wednesday, August 08, 2012 5:33:27 PM

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Posted: Wednesday, August 08, 2012 5:57:19 PM

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usually it helps if you put a little information in the box provided, rather than just a thread title, so people have a better understanding of what it is, exactly, that you need.

Posted: Wednesday, August 08, 2012 7:02:42 PM

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You can send it to me if you would like and I can check for fluidity, grammar, spelling and general horniness. Drop me a message and I'll get back to you with my email

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Posted: Monday, September 17, 2012 4:46:34 PM

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I'd be happy to proofread. I make my living as an editor.
Posted: Thursday, September 20, 2012 10:03:57 AM

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Well, to start, I can already see you've missed out the word "please" there.

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Posted: Thursday, September 20, 2012 10:31:21 AM

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A good start would be a post describing your story and what help you need.

I do have some suggestions for you before you hand your story off to someone else. First, read all of the material on grammar, formatting, etc. in the Writer's Resources. Do not rely on spell check alone as you proof your story as it does not catch mistakes that are words producing unfortunate errors like, "he put his hands on my waste". Put in some of your own time and, even if someone proofs it for you, make an effort to learn from your mistakes and the corrections that are made. That is the way to become a better writer.

And the previous post was correct. Please is good manners.

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