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I just had to share this bit of feedback. This is probably the best I've ever received.


your putrid stories suck you closet queer

Some truth for you retard:++++++++++++++++++++++++++

I URGE YOU TO TAKE GREAT CAUTION, I AM THY GOD, YE TURN FROM MY MESSENGERS AND MINE ONES SENT FORTH AGAIN UNTO YOU AND DENY THESE WORDS, AND YE ERR BEYOND THY COMPREHENSION. SO BE IT.

WHAT IS YOUR KARMIC RESPONSIBILITY IN WRITING AND POSTING THESE LYING CHEATING WHORING STORIES LIKE "My loving wife"??? YOU THE AUTHOR, ARE NOT HELD INNOCENT IN CASES LIKE THIS, WHERE YOUR STORY HAD INFLUENCE ON READERS WHO BELIEVED YOUR STORY AND THEN WENT OUT AND EMULATED YOUR CHARACTERS IN SATANICALLY DRIVEN LUSTFUL ACTIONS.. IN OTHER WORDS YOU CREATE NEGATIVE KARMA FOR YOUR ETERNAL SOUL, IF YOU HAVE A SOUL, AS MANY ON THIS WORLD DON'T.

WHEN THIS HAPPENS, YOU SHALL PAY YOUR KARMIC DEBT FOR THIS !!

Did you ever stop to think that the real adulterers [male or female] who are flushing their marriages down the drain by cheating on their loyal faithful spouses, will pay a price, so terrible that in their worst nightmares they could not match the real consequences that will be the result of their satanic actions.

DO YOU REALLY THINK THAT ALL THIS LUST BASED KRAP YOU LIT AUTHORS WRITE ABOUT , AND WHICH IS HAPPENING IN REAL LIFE EVERYWHERE ON THIS SICK WORLD, IS A FREE RIDE FOR THOSE PARTICIPATING ????

SORRY !!!!!

YOUR SATANIC ABOMINATION CALLED THE SEXUAL REVOLUTION/ WOMEN’S LIBERATION HAS CREATED MORE CHEATING WHORES AND THEIR LOVER-BOYS, THAN YOU COULD IMAGINE. YOU ARE ON THE PLANET THAT HOUSES SATANIC FORCES. IN OTHER WORDS SATAN’S PRISON PLANET. iT IS ALSO THE MOST DIFFICULT OF SCHOOLS FOR SOULS.


It was signed anonymous, so sadly I've missed out on learning more from this moral compass.
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Some people are just plain mean.
Artistic Tart
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I simply forgot to sign that message Damon, sorry!

I'm just glad for all the 'tards out there that make me less of a dumbass by comparison!
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Haha, I think being "mean" is the least of this guy's problems. I think he might need some professional help.
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I think this cat watch's way too many TV. evangalist

Next week he'll be back here reading more while pounding his pud.
secretly..............
Active Ink Slinger
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Thanks Damon now I don't feel so bad... I was just called a pervert.

Some people just don't get that it's a story....
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Lollipop Girl
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Um wow that is mean.
"Haters make me FAMOUS!!!"



Sassy
Flutterby Pharie
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If it was sent from here and signed anonymous, I dont see how that is possible.
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That is worthy of saving to your word processor, Damon.

I am doing something similar here as a moderator. I tentatively plan to create an internet domain and webpage to display the best of the worst, so-to-speak...at some point in time.

You might think about something along those lines for your own website.

This is comedy gold, you cannot allow to be lost to the ages.
The same GQP demanding we move on from January 6th, 2021 is still doing audits of the November 3rd, 2020 election.
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I bet he didn't even vote on your story
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That was actually amusing cowardly though I wouldn't let it bother you bro.
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He's holy but reading smut, huh?
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That's freaking hilarious! WOW that dude has got some issues. I love your stories Damon you one of my fav Lush dirty boys!!! The nastier the better baby keep up the good work.
Bunny12


Bunny Rabbits cute and fuzzy they want to love you but they have razor sharp teeth - don't piss them off!
Alpha Blonde
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That does it!

I'm going to start writing adultery stories from now on... That was way too entertaining to be missed!

I could almost hear the leather whip cracking with every word he wrote... Its like the BDSM version of 'story feedback'.

Reading that kind of turned me on actually... LOL

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Quote by Exakta66
Quote by roccotool
He's holy but reading smut, huh?


I'm sure that's a first...



I love that kind of response. It at least let's me know that I got to them on some level. I've seen a lot of that on another site were they allow annon comments. My advice, be happy you tweaked his nose and call it a win.
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Closet Queer? What a sad pathetic person. I wonder how long it took him to write all that. What a waste of time.

Your work is definitely polarizing Damon. Most good work is.
Internet Philosopher
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Honestly, I'd respect someone who flames me if they had the balls to put their name on it. What I have no respect for at all are those that hide behind their anonymity. If you can't be proud of your own opinion there is probably something wrong with how you form it.
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Quote by Milik_The_Red
Honestly, I'd respect someone who flames me if they had the balls to put their name on it. What I have no respect for at all are those that hide behind their anonymity. If you can't be proud of your own opinion there is probably something wrong with how you form it.


touche!

some bastards just don't get it's a fabulous ART!!! (well, by some writers, anyways!)

Van
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Quote by Milik_The_Red
Honestly, I'd respect someone who flames me if they had the balls to put their name on it. What I have no respect for at all are those that hide behind their anonymity. If you can't be proud of your own opinion there is probably something wrong with how you form it.



Right on!
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Heh, the worst Ive gotten was a chick calling a guy in my story sleezy... and the best part of all was that the dude was meant to be sleezy!

I commend the lonely bastard that wrote you that, it must have taken him a whole 10minutes to write! Other Authors would kill for a response like that, you lucky devil!
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So his wife was unsatisfied with him and she cheated on him? At least thats what I got out of it.
His wife would have most likely cheated on him anyways. Especially if he treats her like that.



His wife is most likely a member in good standing right her on Lush Stories.... And, that is "HER" other dirty little secret!
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Haha, I think being "mean" is the least of this guy's problems. I think he might need some professional help.



Agree, i think he is already on some meds and it doesnt help
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Mr. X, I want to assure you that nobody associated with Zoroastrianism penned this putrid text to your attention. Besides, I like hardcore anal porn stories myself.

Thus spoke Zarathustra.
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The same guy just sent me some more feedback of a different story. Here it is.



YOU ARE CERTAINLY A SICK PILE OF FECAL MATTER AND i WOULD GUESS YOU WILL BE SOMEONE WHO WILL PAY A TERRIBLE PRICE FOR YOUR TWISTED CARNAL SOUL, IF YOU EVEN HAVE ONE. MANY DON'T AND WILL SIMPLY CEASE TO EXIST IN ANY FORM OF CONSCIOUSNESS AT THE END OF THE PLANETARY CYCLE.


They just get better and better.
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Quote by DamonX
The same guy just sent me some more feedback of a different story. Here it is.

They just get better and better.


You get all the fun around here.

I need to start typing again. I am experiencing dickhead-envy.
The same GQP demanding we move on from January 6th, 2021 is still doing audits of the November 3rd, 2020 election.
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If you read it backwards it sounds like Satan talking.. your name was mentioned WMM...
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"Yrrebrub Nnyl Ffej"

Say that, 3 times, fast.

Then, click your heels. Adjust crotch, and wink. Wriggle nose.
The same GQP demanding we move on from January 6th, 2021 is still doing audits of the November 3rd, 2020 election.