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Posted: Monday, April 19, 2010 5:20:19 PM

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Posted: Monday, April 19, 2010 5:24:18 PM

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Guest
Posted: Monday, April 19, 2010 8:14:47 PM

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Good work Lois
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Posted: Monday, April 19, 2010 9:15:58 PM

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This is better than your last poem, which was good, there are more poetic elements in this one. Your poem has a nice melody. I think you have a lot of raw talent and I am not just saying that because I like you, which is true. You should post this one to Love Poems too.
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Posted: Tuesday, April 20, 2010 1:35:26 AM

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Lovely.
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Posted: Tuesday, April 20, 2010 1:45:13 AM

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thanks everyone...It's not really a love poem (well maybe to the sea) which is why I posted this here
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Posted: Tuesday, April 20, 2010 6:47:30 PM

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I like this.
And that's coming from a fellow poet.
It's very flowing, and I attempt to write about the sea all the time, as it's my backyard, but I can't catch it.
You did. And wonderfully.

Reiā™„
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Posted: Tuesday, April 20, 2010 11:52:58 PM

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knowing i am in bed with my love in my arms (u know who u are) and staying in bed all day with my love and not going to cricket,school or work but making sweet love all day with her. while its cold so we will be under the covers all day long
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Posted: Wednesday, April 21, 2010 2:46:27 PM

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thanks the sea is important to me...I'm glad you liked it
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Posted: Wednesday, September 22, 2010 9:44:44 PM

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when u got nothing 2 do
WellMadeMale
Posted: Thursday, September 23, 2010 7:32:49 AM

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Did you win a publishing deal, Lois? hello1

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