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nicola
Posted: Thursday, July 08, 2010 5:58:27 PM

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One thing that makes for a dull story is a predictable storyline, or ending.

I love stories that take me on a journey off the beaten track, the storyline goes off on subtle tangents.

With that in mind, here's a little game.

Write the start of a sentence, the next different poster has to finish it off in an unexpected direction, then post the beginning of a new sentence (can be totally unrelated to the above one).

Here's a silly example:

He was so huge that she doubted whether he would be able to fit...

..under the sink to fix the pipe.

I'll kick it off:

She licked her lips, and unzipped...

(EDIT: please refrain from posting images or videos in this thread)
LadyX
Posted: Thursday, July 08, 2010 6:04:04 PM

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...the little velvet bag that held her makeup essentials. Jason had seemed so nervous on the phone, but now...
Buddybear
Posted: Thursday, July 08, 2010 9:25:01 PM

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as he came through the front door and gracefully slipped off his teeshirt, he seemed the essence of confidence and strength. His eyes burned holes in her soul and his big strong hands...

You've been a bad girl! Now take your pajamas off and go to my room!
Jillicious
Posted: Thursday, July 08, 2010 10:17:35 PM

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opened the pickle jar. The sight of sweat on his brow had caused her to...

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Guest
Posted: Thursday, July 08, 2010 11:01:19 PM

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recoil in horror as she then watched the sweat drip into the wonderful meal he was preparing for her.

This was the moment.. She stood in front of him, wearing nothing but a smile...
Concretus
Posted: Friday, July 09, 2010 2:32:25 AM

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...........and a towel as she dried her hair to get dressed and talk to him on how his day went. He turned around and bent over...............
rxtales
Posted: Friday, July 09, 2010 4:28:21 AM

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the chair in order to reach the marshmallow he had just dropped.

He walked over to the stripper and ...
nicola
Posted: Friday, July 09, 2010 4:31:28 AM

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...continued peeling off the wallpaper.

It was a drab day for doing house improvements so he picked up the phone and called...
Guest
Posted: Friday, July 09, 2010 5:40:01 AM

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Ghostbusters!... who after helping him with the house improvements, then helped him decorate the house in a lovely green slime.

Taking a deep breath, she made her way to his front door; taking her time so she could prepare herself for the bad news she was about to deliver...
Buddybear
Posted: Friday, July 09, 2010 8:16:32 AM

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... shocking news that she was pregnant, either by him, his brother, her father, or her son -- she wasn't sure which. As she delivered the shameful news, a huge bulge formed in his...

You've been a bad girl! Now take your pajamas off and go to my room!
Guest
Posted: Friday, July 09, 2010 9:28:28 AM

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...backpack. "Shit!" He cried. "My liferaft!" He hurried toward the back door, dragging the pack, as the yellow rubber raft began inflating and filling the room...
LadySharon
Posted: Friday, July 09, 2010 10:04:16 AM

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only to discover that the life raft had a stack of old photos in it.

As he flipped through the pictures, he was shocked to see a picture of.......

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myself
Posted: Friday, July 09, 2010 10:14:33 AM

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himself with a person he didn't recognize.

When was this photo taken, he asked himself?

Torture the data long enough and they will confess to anything.
Guest
Posted: Friday, July 09, 2010 12:33:35 PM

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Then it came back to him; the person in the photo was the captain of the tanker that had rescued him when his yacht had sunk, he had not recognised him out of uniform.


He let his mind relive that night in port that he and the captain, and second-mate, had spent visiting whorehouses.
Guest
Posted: Friday, July 09, 2010 1:11:44 PM

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At the time, going to whore houses to sell Bibles to the whores and madames had seemed totally logical, but with hind sight, he realised they may have made a marketing error.

What had become of that joker, the second mate, he wondered, who had the odd habit of...
Guest
Posted: Friday, July 09, 2010 1:50:21 PM

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Sucking on lemons during poker... a strange habit that distracted the others from his terrible poker face.

The man continued to search through the photographs to find...
myself
Posted: Friday, July 09, 2010 2:01:49 PM

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a strange woman reappearing photograph after photograph.

His mind struggled to place the face when he realized, the girl in the photos was the same girl in his bedroom.

Torture the data long enough and they will confess to anything.
Remington
Posted: Friday, July 09, 2010 2:12:08 PM

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The one who snuck into his room during the middle of the night.

She just wanted to taste his..

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JennyP
Posted: Friday, July 09, 2010 2:40:26 PM

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...seed. He had a habit of eating sunflower seeds before bed. There was a big bowl of them on the nightstand. She took his seed in her hands and...
myself
Posted: Friday, July 09, 2010 2:44:53 PM

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salty skin.

The memories seemed hazy as he struggled to remember. He saw himself laid out on a strange bed as she suckled his cock. Not able to move, he barely seemed to have the strength to open his eyes. Managing to see the shape of the woman's head resting on his thigh, he watched her suck from him...

sorry JennyP

Torture the data long enough and they will confess to anything.
WellMadeMale
Posted: Friday, July 09, 2010 5:32:49 PM

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the very last bit of pleasure remaining in his wretched, forty-three year long, vacant marriage to her. He then coursed through the phone book, seeking male escort services, as he sought a little something different....

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nicola
Posted: Saturday, July 10, 2010 3:52:08 AM

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Different it turned out to be, with his fading eyesight, he'd called a taxidermist by mistake who told him to "get stuffed" upon hearing his proposal.

Nicola clicked her browser open, she was feeling slightly aroused, especially after seeing the ad for...

Guest
Posted: Saturday, July 10, 2010 4:14:58 AM

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Nicola clicked her browser open, she was feeling slightly aroused, especially after seeing the ad for...

... the new improved Ride'em Baby! vacuum cleaner with a rug cleaning attatchment. But she wasn't sure that was what her hair dresser had recommended for...
Concretus
Posted: Saturday, July 10, 2010 6:10:39 AM

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.........her to buy as a gift for her sister who moved to new house nearby and was doing a lot of cleaning over there. She was talking to her hairdresser on that while he sliped his hand..........
DirtyMartini
Posted: Saturday, July 10, 2010 7:33:31 AM

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...into his pocket to answer his cell phone. He seemed so surprised at first by who the caller was that he almost...


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WellMadeMale
Posted: Saturday, July 10, 2010 12:23:04 PM

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He almost fed his goldfish, cat food and his cat, fish flakes. Pausing to collect his thoughts, he wondered whether Nicola would receive his advice well at all, or if she would stubbornly insist on offering her sister The Pool Boy Gift coupon, which she had mentioned as a likely option.

Most intelligent people are introspective and doubt themselves while many fucktards are proudly over-confident. - a tip of the hat to Charles Bukowski
myself
Posted: Sunday, July 11, 2010 5:49:48 PM

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Disappointed because he wanted the coupon, he thought of a alternative idea which was...

Torture the data long enough and they will confess to anything.
Guest
Posted: Sunday, July 11, 2010 6:03:30 PM

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...brought to my mind by the buxom neighbor push-mowing the lawn mower. She had that way of...
WellMadeMale
Posted: Sunday, July 11, 2010 6:53:56 PM

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opening wine bottles, removing the cork with her eyebrow, which just sent me over the moon. I felt something crawling across my bare foot, and when I glanced down...

Most intelligent people are introspective and doubt themselves while many fucktards are proudly over-confident. - a tip of the hat to Charles Bukowski
myself
Posted: Monday, July 12, 2010 3:01:27 AM

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I saw that damn spider that she keeps as a pet. The creepy thing stood on his hind legs to taunt before he...

Torture the data long enough and they will confess to anything.
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