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graham397
Posted: Friday, January 20, 2012 4:25:09 PM

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Hello, just posted this in the wrong section but here we go again, I was just wondering what you all thought of the first two parts, any recommendations for improving my writing style etc? thank Graham
RumpleForeskin
Posted: Friday, January 20, 2012 6:48:56 PM

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Don't sweat mistakes; they're a way of life for some of us. However, you'd have a better chance of getting a reply if you posted a link.

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graham397
Posted: Saturday, January 21, 2012 7:33:41 AM

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There's the link :)
sprite
Posted: Saturday, January 21, 2012 8:56:09 AM

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you can't post links until you have at least 20 posts, Graham. since it's national Be nice to people day, i'll do it for you:

http://www.lushstories.com/stories/fetish/the-secret-is-out.aspx

http://www.lushstories.com/stories/fetish/the-secret-is-out-part-2.aspx




Love not hate.
nympho_slave
Posted: Saturday, January 21, 2012 9:07:03 AM

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Hi hun just thought I'd tell you I loved them both. Written so cruelly I love the humiliation tactics of the mistress, I wouldn't mind being her plaything either! :)
graham397
Posted: Saturday, January 21, 2012 11:43:50 AM

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ah I see, thanks Sprite! And thanks Nympho !!!
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