My story: comments and feedback

Rookie Scribe

0 likes 14 May 2012

So I have been thinking about a follow up part which I had always planned for my young lovers story. If you go on my profile it is my only story that I have on here at the moment. I would love any feedback or comments from you and a simple yes or no as to whether you would like me to continue if you enjoyed it. Thanks a lot smile

Magical_felix

Wild at Heart

0 likes 30 May 2012

Look man... I didn't read it. I'm going purely on the numbers.

6 votes on part 1.

0 votes on part 2.

0 replies here.

My advice. Get an avatar and a background. Something sexy. Then write something different. Give it a catchy title. Novels are hard because not many on here will commit to one. If you had more of a following then maybe they will give it a go. Shit, since no one has read it really I would delete your novel. Post something else and if in a year you have some followers THEN post your novel. ALSO, I'd probably never commit to reading a novel with no ending either. You got three things working against you.

You're on no readers radar.

Novels are a tough sell.

You have no ending.

That's why you shouldn't let it discourage you. Even if you were an amazing writer these three things will be a hard hurdle to get over.

Should I continue writing my 'young lovers' novel?