I'm new here. Happily married husband of almost 9 years. My wife and I recently started an online adult toy business that we hope will grow enough so we can have some steady financial stability. But that's not why I'm here, not trying to advertise. I get fantasies, vivid fantasies, about my wife and I, and I wrote one of them down. I was writing as I was think and my handwriting got sloppy, so my wife asked me to type it up, so she could read it. She wanted to enjoy the moment that I created. In the past she has said that I would be good enough at writing stories and I should attempt to publish them. We're not talking "50 Shades of Grey". I don't want to and can't get motivated enough to write anything that long. My stuff is more scenario based, love poems, stuff like that. I have told her that I don't want to offend her with anything that sometimes my stuff gets pretty graphic, she tells me not to worry, I won't offend her. There are things in bed she will do that things she won't do. But when it comes to my fantasies, and my writing, it is going to cross that line. l
I'm just looking for opinions on my writing. Do you see anything wrong with it? Can I go further? I realize these are sex stories, and there are virtually no limits, but total anarchy doesn't float well. I'm hoping my wife will take the opportunity to read all of this any enjoy it as well. Love You Babe
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