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techgoddess
Posted: Monday, May 5, 2008 2:37:41 PM

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Lush wrote:
Very nice Tech. I think a certain someone's all squishy and in love3


Thanks Lush!

Not only contagious....obvious! love10



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Posted: Monday, May 5, 2008 3:12:03 PM

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Such a good way with words, Kitten. Lapplause Definitely contagious, because I feel the same way, too.
techgoddess
Posted: Monday, May 5, 2008 3:23:03 PM

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roccotool wrote:
Such a good way with words, Kitten. Lapplause Definitely contagious, because I feel the same way, too.


Thanks Rocco!
Perhaps if we are both contagious we should play doctor and make each other feel better....
L16

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Curious2c
Posted: Tuesday, May 6, 2008 7:49:11 PM

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Wow... puts a vision in my head techgoddess... one that will stick with me for quite some time I think. Thanks for being brave... again.icon_smile
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Posted: Tuesday, May 6, 2008 7:51:18 PM

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Here's one other one I did a long time ago, soon after I first started writing stories.



Forever Love
by curious2c©

Her auburn hair glows in the light
Green eyes sparkle oh so bright,
Her smile washes over me.
I long to kiss her and to hold
Her body close, Am I too bold?

One heart, two souls entwined
Hands held softly hers in mine.
This is right don't you see.
She leans to me a whisper there
I smell the flowers in her hair.

We walk together on the beach
We touch and hold then we reach
Looking out at the sea.
Twenty-two years have passed so fast
I look back at the past.

Would I trade at all, you are curious
Not on your life I am serious.
Our life together is as 'we'.
Look to the sky late at night
Our love is there in the light.

Binary stars two in one a natural thing
So we stand and the love we bring
It is as if we were meant to be.
Apart we suffer, hearts rapidly beating
Waiting for the return for the greeting.

I love my wife and she loves me
As one we face eternity
We've raised the children three.
Our life tomorrow yet to be
Two hearts as one, don't you see..

techgoddess
Posted: Wednesday, May 7, 2008 2:00:29 PM

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You have a way with words as well, curious. I can envision the scene as I read about it. Thanks for sharing yours as well.
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ASubtlepassion
Posted: Sunday, July 13, 2008 9:47:12 PM

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Okay. I threw this lark of a piece together just now for your pleasure:



Phallic follicles fall
Her mouth envelops me

My knight, his armor shining
Lance readied
Steadied for the blow
Mounted on his steed
He rides her onward
Inward
The joust is on
His thrust is true

Pubic mound impaled
My lance wet with
Victory’s plunge
Another lunge, then another
My steed, her gait is strong
She takes me far and long
The length of the field I ride
With every breath she takes, a stride
I glide as I sit upon her

‘Tis mete that I should tarry
In this frolic on the field
Joust is love and love is a
Victor’s kiss on his maiden’s lips

She holds my head
Between her thighs
I drink to victory as she
Cleans my lance
The knight has won his lady


I must go to bed. Now.
Guest
Posted: Saturday, October 11, 2008 1:57:42 PM

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I am still new at poetry this is my first try at erotic poetry i hope you all like it i have only shared my poems with some close friends




The taste of you


the first taste of your kiss
when our lips meet
feeling your soft smoth skin
next to mine
breathing in your soft scent
letting it fill me
more intoxicating than any spirits
could ever be
tasting every inch of you
slowly softly caressing you
working my way down you
gently to your secret spot
an honor to share your love
the anticipation builds inside me
getting closer I go slow
inch by soft inch
I never want this feeling to end
softly touching your throbbing clit
sends shock waves through us both
never before have I felt a sensation
like this oh the taste of you
is like nothing I have ever known
wanting to savor you slowly
enjoying the taste of you
the scent of you letting it fill
my nose my mouth licking you gentle
I can feel your orgasm build
please flood me with your nector
let the taste the scent never leave
loving the taste of you

techgoddess
Posted: Saturday, October 11, 2008 2:53:04 PM

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Very descriptive bikebum. Welcome and thanks for sharing.

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Guest
Posted: Saturday, October 11, 2008 4:23:30 PM

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Thank you Techgoddes I'm glad you enjoyed. It's the first time I have shared my poetry in a forum. I will share more as I write them Tahnks again.
nicola
Posted: Saturday, October 11, 2008 9:09:36 PM

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Thanks for the addition, and welcome to the forum bikebum hello2
Guest
Posted: Saturday, October 11, 2008 10:26:10 PM

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Thanks Lush I hope you enjoyed it
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Posted: Sunday, October 12, 2008 3:16:20 PM

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Hi all thought I would share this with you please let me know what you think. I hope you enjoy. Just wrote it last night thanks for the comments on my last one.



long dark road
streches for miles
ahead into the
night so dark
the glow of the
one headlight
cuts the dark
like a knife
two souls share
the ride keeping
warm through
the night
hold me close
my dear i will keep
you safe and warm
give me your love
i will give you mine
it will guide us
through the long
dark night as long
you hold me tight
you will be safe
through the long dark night
my love for you will
never end i will
keep you close to me
please hold me tight
through the long
dark night
ASubtlepassion
Posted: Sunday, October 12, 2008 3:39:10 PM

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I wrote this several years ago. It's a bit abrupt, in it's cadence, but here it is:

It Rained

Heated tears
Hold the anguish of my heart
Displayed by the rush
A saline release
My heart is showing its ache
By nature’s way
It rained

The coursing flow
The gush of my heart
Hopes, dreams
Unbidden by my life’s journey
Stay inside
The only sign of their prison
It rained


My vision
Like a windshield
Without the wipers
Stays blurred
I’m held within
Delayed, confined
It rained


The scent
Of a world bathed
Forlorn, yet clean
My heart has stopped
It’s beat tempered
By emotions unleashed
It rained

The sun awakens
Shining through the clouds
The water dispelled
The earth, my mind
Is purged for a time
My hopes lie herein
It rained
Zafia
Posted: Monday, October 13, 2008 8:36:53 AM

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Nicely done Bikebum......and welcome....hello2



Welcome back Subtle....... nice poem.....coffee

"Love all, trust a few, and do wrong to none."





Guest
Posted: Monday, October 13, 2008 1:15:40 PM

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Thanks Zafia glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the welcome glad to join
nicola
Posted: Monday, October 13, 2008 2:20:12 PM

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Nice Greg icon_smile
ASubtlepassion
Posted: Wednesday, October 15, 2008 7:00:56 PM

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This reminds me of Chaz Michael Michael from 'Blades of Glory', and his book of poetry entitled, 'Let Me Put My Poems In You'.
Zafia
Posted: Thursday, October 16, 2008 10:53:19 AM

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That movie was hilarious.....laughing8

"Love all, trust a few, and do wrong to none."





ASubtlepassion
Posted: Thursday, October 16, 2008 10:44:16 PM

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My sons are always quoting it.

"Don't touch me! No one touches me." (that'd be my youngest)
Zafia
Posted: Friday, October 17, 2008 5:24:19 PM

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My favorite quote is:

"They laughed at Louis Armstrong when he said he was gonna go to the moon. Now he's up there, laughing at them."

I'm crackin up even as I write it.....LOL!!!

"Love all, trust a few, and do wrong to none."





ASubtlepassion
Posted: Saturday, October 18, 2008 1:09:11 PM

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Let's go improv:

Oooh
Mmmm
Oh!
Mmmm
Oh! Oh! Oh!
Yes!
Mmmm
(intake of breath)
Mmmm

Mmmmmmmm....
techgoddess
Posted: Tuesday, November 4, 2008 2:59:51 PM

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Nice ASP. but mine might be a bit more descriptive:



I Lie Waiting for You

I lie waiting for you
my body trembling in excitement and anticipation
my scent fills the air
my soft silky limbs spread open wide for you
my heart races
my bare sex glistening in want and need of you
my breath quickens
my whole being yearning to be taken
my smile widens
my creamy breasts beg for your attention
my hips lift
my wetness gives way to your thick heat
my back arches
my body meets yours thrust for thrust
my throat moans
my pink folds thicken as my pleasure mounts
my juices flow
my voice screams out as we explode together
my chest heaves
my breath escapes in contented sighs
my eyes close
my mind wanders as my body seems to float
I lie waiting for you
my soul needs to be with you again.


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Guest
Posted: Tuesday, November 4, 2008 8:36:01 PM

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Preview, baby? That was hot!
techgoddess
Posted: Wednesday, November 5, 2008 5:04:04 AM

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roccotool wrote:
Preview, baby? That was hot!


Yes baby, Happy Anniversary. Can't wait til Saturday!

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nicola
Posted: Wednesday, November 5, 2008 1:36:58 PM

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Great poem tech. You should put it in it's own separate post.

Have a "blast" on Saturday guys love3
ASubtlepassion
Posted: Wednesday, November 5, 2008 6:54:21 PM

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Oooh, Tech! Oo LaLa!
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Mumbles, with writing like that, she's gonna wear me out before I even get there...Whistle
Zafia
Posted: Thursday, November 6, 2008 9:46:06 AM

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Very nice poem Tech.....and awww hope you guys have a romantic time and enjoy your anniversary.....hello2

"Love all, trust a few, and do wrong to none."





techgoddess
Posted: Thursday, November 6, 2008 1:17:56 PM

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Zafia wrote:
Very nice poem Tech.....and awww hope you guys have a romantic time and enjoy your anniversary.....hello2


Thanks Z!

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