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How can I extend this poem to longform prose. Rate, review, and comment, Please!

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Just_A_Guy_You_Know
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Don't use line breaks and write in paragraphs. Then write more.

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Liz
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An interesting piece, although I'm not sure how well this poem would lend itself to a more fleshed-out prose format.
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An interesting piece, although I'm not sure how well this poem would lend itself to a more fleshed-out prose format.


I'm sure we can figure it out. I kind of wrote it as a motivational primer anyway. It would be tough, but I am much more well read on deeper topics than when I wrote that 5 years ago. I have some great ideas, and welcome more from you, and others. I will definitely write a spiritual or/and actual sequel to it.
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Don't use line breaks and write in paragraphs. Then write more.



Thanks. Those are great suggestions. I probably should extend the poem to a longer length first and resubmit it somehow. Perhaps as an expanded sequel. I would love a comment and a score from you. Thanks.