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HI

I'm an upcoming writer [aren't we all]. And like all writers, I thrive off constructive feedback.

I write in various genres, including Loving Wives, Cuckold and Humour & Satire. But all my work contains at least an element of humour which has been described dark and sardonic


Current project: Love Burn [A college based RomCom. Non-Erotic but a good laugh]
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Personal Fave: Adventures of Cameltoe [A laugh out loud take on the legend of King Arthur]
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My Guilty Pleasure: RED [Tom owns a shoe shop and falls for one of his customers.]
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For all other submissions check out my Lush Author page
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I look forward to your comments.

Max
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Max,

Hogwash here, writer of the Alphia Corporation series and other tales of smut and erotica.

I saw your post about writing stories based on ideas from other people.

I have written the start of two stories outside the Sam and Carrie universe and have given up finishing them. One was written at the request of a fan on lush who wanted a story of a housewife taken in her home by strangers. I wrote the setup piece to it, called it chapter 1 and submitted it to lush. The editors rejected it because it seemed to be setting up a fantasy.

I was honestly shocked because that was not how I envisioned the story moving forward but when I read it again I could understand their concerns. I never went back to it.

I also wrote a setup piece about a young couple, just graduated from College, living and working at a renaissance faire where the girls decide to tease and hold out from the guys until closing day ...

Both are well written but mostly at setup stage and I have lost interest in finishing either. I would like to share them with you. If either kicks your muse into gear, let’s talk.

Your thoughts? Shall I send them over?

Thanks.

- Hogwash
- hogwash