new poem is gunna be up for anyone who cares this time its a real love poem
A top is up and running, somewhere
problems have been solved my poems are posed as stories. i am seriously considering revising the spacing in "A Top" any comments?
so apperently posting poems didnt turn out like i hoped....
A Top A snow covered mountain top resides a soilidary tree long abandoned.
Deep cuts that peirce to its center bleed out sap, that runs down to the snow.
Its needes slowly changing from comforting green to a dreary brown in longing for the tree that stood next to it
Now, there is only a deep frost coated hole.
there is no more warmth for this tree.
i think i might post some of my work, poetry, on here if no one minds. i would love comments to impove my writing.