I am, in fact, JefferyB. I'm not nearly smart enough to think of a clever name or come up with a sexy photo ... mostly because I'm not very clever or sexy. I'm just an old guy that has wanted to write erotic stories for many years. In fact I've been writing them more or less secretly for a few years. Now that I've found this site I'm hoping to get some feedback on my writing and my stories. So I hope that you'll pass along your comments. I'm not looking to find a sex partner, but for good advice on how to improve my writing. Many thanks to those of you that have already shared your thoughts with me.I've just finished my first novel. After posting more than 30 stories on Lush, I decided to try my hand at a complete book. It was an enjoyable experience.
Congrats to all ... there were some damned good stories in this competition and a great topic.
My fav ... You don't sweat much for a fat girl.
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Pulling her car up to the traffic light, she picked up the large plaque on the seat beside her and read it once again. “ Presented to Dr. Amanda G. Cartwright for Outstanding Service to the English Department, City College .” She read the inscription once more and smiled. After all these years and all this work she finally received some recognition. She thought of her husband, Gary,...
Added 15 Oct 2014 | Category MILF
| Votes 30 | Avg Score 4.96
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He sat at his desk, holding his business card in his hand. “Mitchell B. Edwards,” it read. Below his name it said, “Director of Corporate Development.” “Should I be impressed?” he thought to himself. “I’m pretty young to be a Director of anything, but I’m not especially impressed myself,” he thought. “At thirty-two I am a director in this large and growing company. My Mom is impressed at...
Added 23 Nov 2013 | Category First Time
| Votes 46 | Avg Score 4.67
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Saturday afternoon and Mitch was sitting in front of the TV set, watching a baseball game and drinking beer. He was on his own this weekend for the first time in months. Bre’s college roommate had come to town for the weekend and the girls were spending their time together catching up on the past couple of years. Bre had taken Friday off from work to have a three-day weekend. Mitch...
Added 25 Nov 2014 | Category Group Sex
| Votes 11 | Avg Score 4.91
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At the request of a fan ... “Are you ready to go?” Evan looked up from his desk to see his assistant standing in the doorway of his office. She was leaning against the door and smiling at him. “I am ready,” he answered. “Just let me send this email to our idiot client and then we can go.” “Maybe I’ll just stand here until you finish. I know that you tend to stress over messages...
Added 19 Sep 2013 | Category Exhibitionism
| Votes 54 | Avg Score 4.7
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Using the Bluetooth feature on his car, Evan had called his office and asked to be connected to his assistant, Laura. “This is Laura,” he heard her pleasant voice. “May I help you?” “Hi darlin’, it’s Evan.” “I’ve been waiting for you to call,” she said with an exasperated voice. “What happened?” “It’s all good news,” he replied. Laura could see the smile on his face from the tone of...
Added 12 Nov 2014 | Category Mature
| Votes 15 | Avg Score 5
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Seduced at 36,000’ The voice overhead said, “American Airlines flight 84 to Washington Dulles is now boarding at gate 55.” It was 10:30 on Sunday night and Spencer was taking the Red Eye to the East Coast. He never liked taking these flights, but getting in early on Monday morning was certainly better than arriving in the afternoon and being totally out of it for the week ahead....
Added 04 Feb 2014 | Category First Time
| Votes 27 | Avg Score 4.88
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“Isn’t this a great bedroom?” Cynthia asked her client as he looked around the furnished room. “It is quite nice,” he responded, but she felt no warmth in his voice. “Look at this bathroom,” she instructed with a broad smile. “It’s quite roomy and has a walk-in shower that will hold you and your girlfriend at the same time. Just imagine how much fun that would be.” “My girlfriend?” he...
Added 24 Jun 2015 | Category Seduction
| Votes 14 | Avg Score 4.71
| Views 3,320
| 12 Comments
He stood there quietly, leaning against the wall, nursing a single malt scotch and observing the people attending this party. As he sipped his host’s superb whisky he spotted that same host making his way through the crowd of people in his direction. Not only was the man a wonderful host, Josh was also a great friend. “What are you doing over here by yourself?” Josh asked. “I don’t...
Added 25 Sep 2014 | Category Seduction
| Votes 19 | Avg Score 4.95
| Views 4,790
| 10 Comments
Sitting at his desk and reading what must have been his 500 th email of the day, Spencer heard a light knock at his office door. Looking up he was greeting by a lovely, smiling face attached to much better than average body on a woman he didn’t think he knew. More than happy for the interruption and pleased that it came from a female he said, “Hi. Come in, please.” She stepped inside...
Added 22 Jun 2013 | Category Straight Sex
| Votes 32 | Avg Score 4.6
| Views 8,681
| 13 Comments
They were in the car driving to meet some friends for dinner. This meeting had been planned for several weeks for tonight. They had both come home from work in time to change clothes and head back out the door. As they drove, Ted was quiet and Terri asked, “What’s wrong, baby?” “Nothing’s wrong, why do you say that?” he responded. Terri touched him on his leg and said, “I ask what’s...
Added 18 Jul 2013 | Category Exhibitionism
| Votes 28 | Avg Score 4.62
| Views 9,032
| 7 Comments
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