I am, in fact, JefferyB. I'm not nearly smart enough to think of a clever name or come up with a sexy photo ... mostly because I'm not very clever or sexy. I'm just an old guy that has wanted to write erotic stories for many years. In fact I've been writing them more or less secretly for a few years. Now that I've found this site I'm hoping to get some feedback on my writing and my stories. So I hope that you'll pass along your comments. I'm not looking to find a sex partner, but for good advice on how to improve my writing. Many thanks to those of you that have already shared your thoughts with me.I've just finished my first novel. After posting more than 30 stories on Lush, I decided to try my hand at a complete book. It was an enjoyable experience.
Two at a time is my limit ... I think those women would most likely turn on each other ... Hummm, that sounds like a plot for a triple-X movie.
Once again I'll have to say that I agree with the Judge(s). Those were the best of the best.Well done and congratulations!
I'm guessing that you never saw ... Son of the MaskI dare you to beat that one for awful.
I don't always agree with the judges, but certainly do this time. And, "I Hate You" was simply a cut above the rest.There was some superior work done by the winners and runners up.
In a hotel room, with the air conditioner running full speed (because its hot outside) and with a naked woman begging me to join her in the bed. Yeah ... that's the ticket!
I was 19 and he was 71. That sounds like the winner to me!Did you enjoy it as much as he did?
As I recall, a Dodge Lancer ... something like a 1965 model. It had a stick shift that wrapped over the front seat. In order to get her in the cowboy position I had to put it into reverse so that we had room for her leg. That car got quite a workout.
May I have 199?Thanks
Hell Yeah! I spent most of my time in San Antonio and went to UT Austin.
Pulling her car up to the traffic light, she picked up the large plaque on the seat beside her and read it once again. “ Presented to Dr. Amanda G. Cartwright for Outstanding Service to the English Department, City College .” She read the inscription once more and smiled. After all these years and all this work she finally received some recognition. She thought of her husband, Gary,...
Added 15 Oct 2014 | Category MILF
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He sat at his desk, holding his business card in his hand. “Mitchell B. Edwards,” it read. Below his name it said, “Director of Corporate Development.” “Should I be impressed?” he thought to himself. “I’m pretty young to be a Director of anything, but I’m not especially impressed myself,” he thought. “At thirty-two I am a director in this large and growing company. My Mom is impressed at...
Added 23 Nov 2013 | Category First Time
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Saturday afternoon and Mitch was sitting in front of the TV set, watching a baseball game and drinking beer. He was on his own this weekend for the first time in months. Bre’s college roommate had come to town for the weekend and the girls were spending their time together catching up on the past couple of years. Bre had taken Friday off from work to have a three-day weekend. Mitch...
Added 25 Nov 2014 | Category Group Sex
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At the request of a fan ... “Are you ready to go?” Evan looked up from his desk to see his assistant standing in the doorway of his office. She was leaning against the door and smiling at him. “I am ready,” he answered. “Just let me send this email to our idiot client and then we can go.” “Maybe I’ll just stand here until you finish. I know that you tend to stress over messages...
Added 19 Sep 2013 | Category Exhibitionism
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Using the Bluetooth feature on his car, Evan had called his office and asked to be connected to his assistant, Laura. “This is Laura,” he heard her pleasant voice. “May I help you?” “Hi darlin’, it’s Evan.” “I’ve been waiting for you to call,” she said with an exasperated voice. “What happened?” “It’s all good news,” he replied. Laura could see the smile on his face from the tone of...
Added 12 Nov 2014 | Category Mature
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The story changes direction … Away from the lingerie shop to the power and sex of big business. Evan and Laura enter into a bold new world. It was 9:45 on Wednesday morning before Evan walked into the office. He was greeted by the receptionist as he strode down the hallway to his office. He stopped at Laura’s desk long enough to say, “Please tell Mr. Sinclair’s assistant that I request...
Added 21 Nov 2014 | Category Office Sex
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Once inside her apartment, Evan put the packages he was carrying on her dining table and turned around. As soon as he did, Laura threw her arms around his neck, giving him a long, hard, passionate kiss. When the kiss finally broke she smiled into his eyes saying, “I am so happy you are here.” “That kiss makes me think that you ar e,” he said returning her smile. “You were here last for...
Added 30 Dec 2014 | Category Office Sex
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After meeting with Josh and Ann, Evan and Laura went to their office space to clean things up before they left the building. Evan instructed Laura to write letters of resignation for both of them, to print them on official company letterhead stationery and to date them effective on Thursday. Evan was bristling with excitement. Now that he knew that his employer was going to try to change...
Added 19 Jan 2015 | Category Office Sex
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Seduced at 36,000’ The voice overhead said, “American Airlines flight 84 to Washington Dulles is now boarding at gate 55.” It was 10:30 on Sunday night and Spencer was taking the Red Eye to the East Coast. He never liked taking these flights, but getting in early on Monday morning was certainly better than arriving in the afternoon and being totally out of it for the week ahead....
Added 04 Feb 2014 | Category First Time
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He stood there quietly, leaning against the wall, nursing a single malt scotch and observing the people attending this party. As he sipped his host’s superb whisky he spotted that same host making his way through the crowd of people in his direction. Not only was the man a wonderful host, Josh was also a great friend. “What are you doing over here by yourself?” Josh asked. “I don’t...
Added 25 Sep 2014 | Category Seduction
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