I am, in fact, JefferyB. I'm not nearly smart enough to think of a clever name or come up with a sexy photo ... mostly because I'm not very clever or sexy. I'm just an old guy that has wanted to write erotic stories for many years. In fact I've been writing them more or less secretly for a few years. Now that I've found this site I'm hoping to get some feedback on my writing and my stories. So I hope that you'll pass along your comments. I'm not looking to find a sex partner, but for good advice on how to improve my writing. Many thanks to those of you that have already shared your thoughts with me.My first e-book was published in June 2015. After posting more than 30 stories on Lush, I decided to try my hand at a complete book. It was an enjoyable experience. So enjoyable that I will have a second book released in April 2016.
Spencer Tracy & Katherine Hepburn
I don't have many complaints .. you get what you pay for and I pay nothing to be here. But if there is one thing that annoys me it would be those writers that have 'blocked' someone who had the 'utter nerve' to give one of their post a score lower than '5'. How completely childish! I suppose those writers believe their work is so superior that it simply shouldn't be scored .. in which case they should just say they don't want scores .. period. Take the scoring option off and just be thrilled at the 37 followers that read your story. It is just so phony to block people from scoring. If there is someone that is giving a score of '1' when you have 35 scores of '5' .. complain to management.I would further recommend that authors who have anyone blocked from scoring should not be allowed to submit stories into Lush competitions. That is simply .. cheating. Not that I think the judges give a rip what scores and comments are left, but still there is the look that 'those' writers are being given an advantage. If I am not mistaken, the rules of the competitions are supposed to make certain that no writer has an advantage over the others.
In the movie, "The Quiet Man" when John Wayne tosses his wife (Maureen O'Hara) at the feet of her brother and says, "No dowry, no marriage." What follows is the best fist fight ever in a movie. https://upload.lushstories.com/1558739208-Quiet.jpg
I think my favorite female character is Amanda Cartwright, the principal character in Youth Revisited . She is a single mom, PhD and a strong woman. In her early 50's she discovers that the young man dating her daughter was a student of hers and has always wanted her. She was very real to me.I'm also quite fond of Miss Cynthia, a secondary character in Miss Cynthia's Lingerie Shop . She was so popular with the readers of that story that I wrote a second one with her as a primary character.
I like the idea of "Pay for Play." I have at least one story I've written that would fit that category more than the one its in.
May I have 118
Congratulations to the winners ... well deserved.I am very grateful to have made the Top 10. Thanks to the judges for finding my story acceptable.
I think all three!
A few minutes past 10:00 in the evening, Karen walked through the small living room of her one bedroom apartment. As she walked to her kitchen she heard the voice that called her every night. Stopping in the doorway to the kitchen, she looked back at the single chair sitting in front of the small table holding her laptop computer. “Leave me alone,” she shouted at the empty chair. ...
Added 24 Mar 2016 | Category Exhibitionism
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Pulling her car up to the traffic light, she picked up the large plaque on the seat beside her and read it once again. “ Presented to Dr. Amanda G. Cartwright for Outstanding Service to the English Department, City College .” She read the inscription once more and smiled. After all these years and all this work she finally received some recognition. She thought of her husband, Gary,...
Added 15 Oct 2014 | Category MILF
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Alec had just finished working with a mother to get some shots of her six month-old baby girl. As he walked into his office he wondered how many baby pictures he had taken in his thirty years as a professional photographer. He reminded himself he shouldn’t complain about anyone that still used a photographer. With the number of cameras available to people now, it was a wonder he had...
Added 27 Apr 2016 | Category Wife Lovers
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It had been a little more than three weeks since Bre’s friend Lilly had visited them from Chicago. Bre and Mitch were back into their regular routine. He spent Wednesday nights in her townhome and she spent her weekends at his apartment. They had not spent much time discussing the threesome weekend, but it was understood it was most enjoyable and would be repeated if given the opportunity. ...
Added 25 Feb 2016 | Category Group Sex
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Ted was sitting at his desk late on Tuesday afternoon. Because it was already dark outside, most of the people in his part of the building had already gone home for the day. Having been divorced for almost two years, Ted wasn’t in any rush to go home. The idea of going to his empty kitchen to find something to eat didn’t appeal to him and he would often work into the evening. He went...
Added 30 Dec 2015 | Category Masturbation
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Wednesday morning found Ted’s mind still in a blur with what had happened in his office yesterday afternoon. The whole concept of what he had done and said still felt unreal to him. Had he actually asked her if she wanted to watch and then if she wanted to stroke his cock? Had he actually dropped his pants and masturbated in front of a lovely female co-worker? If fact, Ted wondered if...
Added 05 Jan 2016 | Category Office Sex
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After Michelle left, Ted went back into his bedroom. He stood looking at his bed. It looked like a tornado had hit. The top sheet was on the floor. The bottom sheet had at least five large wet spots that now looked almost black. One pillow was on the bed and the other was missing in action. He smiled to himself thinking about what happened on his bed for four hours. Not that he would ever...
Added 26 Jan 2016 | Category Anal
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David and Christi were on their way home from an office party. She had come to him after they had been there only a little over an hour with a plea to take her home. When he asked if she was feeling unwell, she simply replied that she wanted to go home. He thanked the host, saying that they had to be up early the next day and left. The ride home had been quiet, but when David put on...
Added 06 Oct 2015 | Category Anal
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At the request of a fan ... “Are you ready to go?” Evan looked up from his desk to see his assistant standing in the doorway of his office. She was leaning against the door and smiling at him. “I am ready,” he answered. “Just let me send this email to our idiot client and then we can go.” “Maybe I’ll just stand here until you finish. I know that you tend to stress over messages...
Added 19 Sep 2013 | Category Exhibitionism
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The voice overhead said, “American Airlines flight 84 to Washington Dulles is now boarding at gate 55.” It was 10:30 on Sunday night and Spencer was taking the Red Eye to the East Coast. He never liked taking these flights, but getting in early on Monday morning was certainly better than arriving in the afternoon and being totally out of it for the week ahead. He would arrive in...
Added 04 Feb 2014 | Category First Time
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Four people ban together to defy their employer and assemble a company of their own, without the rules and restrictions of everyday firms. Led by Evan Sanders, the group strikes out to create their personal fortunes as they work, live and love in a bold new fashion. From their first meeting in a...
A Virginia housewife meets a sexy stranger on a cross country flight that changes her life...
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