Have you ever been so alone, you wake up everyday and wish you hadn't? Looked at your phone and saw nothing but a bill to pay at the end of each month even though you don't call or get called by anyone? Ever feel like screaming at the top of your lungs, but as soon as you open your mouth, your voice disappears? Ever felt like talking to someone, but hiding the truth because you fear that the person you trust may not even give a flying fuck? How bout sitting amongst a group of people and never fitting in? Or going to work fully knowing that you're not going to amount to anything? Ever feel like crying, but the tears don't flow? How bout reading a book, but stop because you can't relate to any of the characters for the simple reason being that you don't have 'friends' anymore? Have you ever looked into someone's eyes and saw the words "I wish you were dead right now"? Was that person in fact your parents? Have you ever stopped talking to what little true friends you have because you don't want to burden them with your own problems? Or resisted talking to someone in fear of becoming too close, and that maybe one day that person won't be there anymore? Have you ever been so alone, that in a world full of over 7 billion people, you know for a fact that no one will ever understand what the fuck is going on in your head? Have you ever been so alone that you ended up talking to your walls? And then got depressed cause you wish they would reply, but sadly know that if they could, they wouldn't because you annoy the fuck out of yourself? Have you ever been so alone that you just wish someone, somewhere would kill you? It doesn't matter who will or won't miss you, you just don't want to breathe anymore?
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I only accept if their kidneys are fully functional. Then again, I don't get requests. So, I wouldnt know. But I guess the things I would do is check their profile, read the Bio (if they have one), age (gotta be under 45) and check their interests (What's the point if we got nothing in common, right?)
Only 7 inches? Duuuuuuuude you've got a serious problem! You should see a doctor!Didn't you go through that phase in your life where you curled up inside a cocoon and completely transformed, leaving you at a whopping 12 inches? :O Oh that's right. That doesnt happen.................................................................................
It's when you start in one tense switch to another and then back again. E.g I saw (past) her sitting there and walk (present) over to introduce myself. She grabbed (past) my hand and says (present), "I saw you watching me." Damn, that's going to take a while to change. :| Thanks for clearing that up, though :) I appreciate it.
always remember, 10,000 words gets you published. 10,001 gets you a visit by some very unsavory Ukrainians armed with pliers and rubber hoses. ;) I'm not sure I understand this. As for my rejected story, uh........ I know that this is dumb, but, what's 'tense shifts'?
If you really want to see what you did wrong, all you have to do is go to the top of the page, click Account and you should see "My stories" on the drop down menu, you can see your rejected story there and why it was removed. Also, there should be a message from a verifier in your inbox. I'll be sure to check that out. Thank you for the info :)
HahahaYep, that's the limit. As long as you don't go over 10,000 words, edit it properly and keep within the guidelines, should be ok. I took a peek at why the last one was rejected, as long as you don't do what you did last time, you should be fine. if a story goes past the 10,000 word limit, i suggest you simply break it into two parts - that's common practice here for many of our writers. :) Oooh I kinda forgot what I did wrong last time, plus it would have taken a while to edit and stuff.... I'll get to it, one day. I think I'll make parts to this, actually. There'a lot of potential for the future in the scenes I'm writing, and I'm putting in a ton of build up (to build characters, somewhat.)
The limit is 3000 characters which is roughly 500-600 words, depending on how long your words are. I tend to write my stories about 2000-4000 words so that I can have a solid beginning and not rush the ending. Whoa, you tricked me with your profile picture for a second. I thought Sprite replied to this :P :) When you say limit, I'm just going to assume that that's the minimum required for a story. Right now I'm in the process or writing one, it's about 3,000 words and I havent even introduced sex! <img src="/forum/images/emoticons/eusa_doh.gif" alt="d'oh!"> I hope when I post it they dont reject it... like my other story.
Seriously, I'm going to start writing again and I'd like to know what's a good average word count to have. I know some people like nivek_88 has about 10,000 per part (assuming, not really sure) but his stories never get worn out. I've read a few stories on here that's really disappointed me in terms of length (that's what she said?), and I dont want to finish too soon, or too abruptly. So, an idea of how long a good story is is probably a good place to start.
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