I would appreciate help with editing, grammar and punctuation on a story I wrote...Thanks,mailman20028
I would appreciate help with editing, grammar, and punctuation for a story I wrote..
It was a fall weekend and some friends were throwing a party when their parents left to go out of town. I first meet Vickie while she was dating my cousin. Vickie had emerald green eyes with red hair and a beautiful smile. Vickie's breasts were a small A cup. Vickie had a great looking ass. She probably weighed no more than 105 pounds and stood 5'0" tall. My cousin Mike had been dating Vickie...
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