Forum posts made by naughtyannie

Topic Re-writing stories
Posted 29 Apr 2017 08:39

I pretty much agree with what Burquette has said. Generally, I feel that once a story is online, then that's it. I've done the best I can with it, and once I've launched it into the world, it's up to it to sink or swim.

Almost the only exception is my first published Lush story (nearly 6 years ago), which I went back to in 2015 and rewrote quite a lot of. It's improved the style, I think, and I'm glad I did it.

The only other changes I've made to some older stories is to improve the punctuation. Lush wasn't always as strict as it now is, and some of my earlier stuff is/was a bit sloppy, which bothers me now.

Whenever I'm tempted to spend some time rewriting an old piece, I'm reminded of the composer Anton Bruckner, who spend so much time in older life revising his early symphonies that he died before he had time to write any new ones (more or less).

Topic New Author/New to Lush, posted today -- Need Votes for Contest
Posted 28 Apr 2017 22:18

It's lovely to have a new member jumping right in with a competition entry. Nice one, and welcome! :)

Topic If your teddy bear suddenly could talk...
Posted 27 Apr 2017 09:24

He's probably traumatised by now, considering what he's seen. Poor thing.

Topic Girls, have you ever taken a shower with another girl?
Posted 26 Apr 2017 13:22

Yes, and with sexual activity very much in mind.

Happy not to disappoint you! evil4

Topic When you suck a man's cock, is it because you are horny or do you just want to make him happy?
Posted 20 Apr 2017 22:26

I just enjoy sucking cocks. Fortunately, most men seem willing to indulge me in this innocent foible.

Topic Lush Matching Photo Game:
Posted 18 Apr 2017 14:39

That's cos you jumped in in front of me, you cheeky basket.

But I'll let you off just this once.


https://upload.lushstories.com/930189935-jamescrane5_b69ec3.jpg

Pool table

Topic Small Breasts/ Tiny Titties
Posted 18 Apr 2017 14:35

https://upload.lushstories.com/913656697-flatchested1.jpg

Topic Lush Matching Photo Game:
Posted 18 Apr 2017 14:29

https://upload.lushstories.com/1599453463-tophat_cd3c8f.jpg

Bow tie

Topic Awesome Award 4/17/17: HeraTeleia
Posted 17 Apr 2017 21:31

Congratulations! Very well deserved.

Topic Kiss with sperm in the mouth ?
Posted 14 Apr 2017 23:16

Seriously, you need to clarify the question. Who's got the sperm in their mouth? Him or her? If I've got sperm in my mouth, I don't care who I kiss.

Topic im master4cuckold brown chocolat bi penis 22.7
Posted 14 Apr 2017 02:09

I thought we were talking about the (X-)hamster.

It's got hair all over.

Topic Erotic Art
Posted 11 Apr 2017 12:26

https://upload.lushstories.com/1660680212-eart_15271058.jpg

Topic Upskirt pics
Posted 11 Apr 2017 12:20

https://upload.lushstories.com/922089585-tumblr_oltdm3Sg1f1uzd7kjo1_500.jpg

Topic Lush Matching Photo Game:
Posted 11 Apr 2017 12:16

https://upload.lushstories.com/1096854224-waves.jpg

Bottomless bikini

Topic im master4cuckold brown chocolat bi penis 22.7
Posted 11 Apr 2017 11:01

Not sure about the whiskers though...

Topic What's Your Current Mood.
Posted 09 Apr 2017 21:42

Satisfied.

Topic Would you like a 3some with the 2 members Above You.....Yes or No?
Posted 09 Apr 2017 21:39

Yes please! That looks like a lot of fun.

Topic Masturbating on Lush
Posted 09 Apr 2017 21:37

I often masturbate when reading the stories. Not so much when chatting, except with a few special people.

Topic Insects are totally cool but butterflies will fuck you up
Posted 08 Apr 2017 15:03

Okay, let's all calm down.

Here's a Bee Fly, doing its best to out-cute the entire insect world

https://upload.lushstories.com/471462227-bee fly.jpg

Would cuddle. 13/10.

Topic Insects are totally cool but butterflies will fuck you up
Posted 08 Apr 2017 14:48

Yeah, just look at those eyes, boring into your soul.

Once its seen you, it'll never stop until it's got its long sticky tongue out and licked you to death.

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Actually, that doesn't sound too bad...

Topic Insects are totally cool but butterflies will fuck you up
Posted 08 Apr 2017 14:40

https://upload.lushstories.com/642578206-killer_butterfly.jpg

Rachel?




Rachel?




I'm coming to get you, Rachel!

Topic On a scale of 1 to 10, 10 being the highest, what number would you rate your blowjob skill?
Posted 07 Apr 2017 22:36

I always hate these self-assessment tests. I'd rate myself as about 7, but I'd be hoping my assessor would mark me up to a 10. ;)

Topic Announcing our "Passion" Poetry Competition
Posted 05 Apr 2017 11:53

Will a poem written in free verse catch the eyes of the judges?
Or is the rhyme dictionary king of this comp?

I started out trying to write a piece that rhymed and scanned, but the challenge of finding a rhyme for Cockfosters defeated me.

And as for scanning a line with Caledonian Road...

So free(ish) verse it had to be.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/erotic-poems/piccadilly-line-passion.aspx

Annie

Topic Her Royal Awesomeness Award
Posted 05 Apr 2017 04:18

Congratulations! In so many ways, probably more than she knows, she's made this place somewhere special. Thank you 😙

Topic LOOK QUICK! How Many of Your Friends Are Currently Online
Posted 03 Apr 2017 13:47

Double figures - 12

Topic Awesome Award 4/1/17: Cleo El Gato
Posted 02 Apr 2017 13:23

Tch! I see Cleo's been at Mistress Sprite's keyboard again...

Topic Collaborators... share who you've written with or want to write with...
Posted 02 Apr 2017 13:18

I'd always been shy of collaborating with anyone (and unsure about how it would work).

But the other day my friend Abigail Thornton asked me if I'd like to do a story with her, and we chatted about how it might work. She sent me the rough draft of a story she'd been working on, and I picked one of the characters and wrote an alternating series of scenes from their point of view (adding one new character, and fleshing out another).

I think it worked out pretty well, and it was fun taking someone else's story and using it as a springboard for my own imagination. I'd definitely collaborate again.

Oh, and the story is here if you want to read it - https://www.lushstories.com/stories/cuckold/it-takes-two.aspx

Topic When you gave your 1st blow job did the guy cum in your mouth and did you swallow?
Posted 31 Mar 2017 20:35

No to both. I was giving a hand job, and he asked me to suck it, so I did. But when he said he was going to come, I pulled him out, and he spurted onto the ground. The first time I swallowed was because we were in the cinema, and there was nothing else to do with it. Fun times!

Topic Lush Matching Photo Game:
Posted 31 Mar 2017 11:41

https://upload.lushstories.com/830590640-TomPoulton.jpg

Movie projector

Topic According To YOU, Which Is The Best Evil Child Movie?
Posted 29 Mar 2017 10:47

Annie.

My mum would probably agree with you there.