Forum posts made by naughtyannie

Topic Skinny dipping with the lush member above
Posted 12 Dec 2017 22:10

No. Still too busy with Ginger and the other girls lol.

Topic NaughtyAnnie’s Cavalcade of Naughtyness
Posted 11 Dec 2017 12:30

Two linked pieces today...


Just For You (Girls) and
Just For You (Guys)

Date online - 17/18 June 2011

Category – Love Poems

Number of reads to date – Girls - 3422; Guys - 4569

Links –

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/love-poems/just-for-you-girls.aspx

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/love-poems/just-for-you-guys.aspx

Badges – None

Reader comments:

"You have a enchanting and powerful diction. Words seem to be flowing from you, conveying exactly the emotions and feelings you wanna describe. Lovely."

"So very sensual and erotic. Made me long for the touch of another woman"

"This was a yummy poem to read in bed this morning."

"beautiful images form your words, hauntingly sensual"

"great..erotic and well written....you have a special way with words"


There’s not a great deal to say about these two parallel stories/poems, although I guess it’s unusual to have two versions of the same piece, written as straight/lesbian alternatives.

I didn’t start off meaning to write two versions, but I think I couldn’t decide whether to make it a straight or lesbian piece, and then the idea came to write it twice.

I didn’t actually submit them to the “poetry” section of Lush, because I didn’t think of them like that. They were just pieces of erotic prose laid out in a loose way on the page. But the moderator moved them into the “love poems” section, and I think that’s probably the right place for them, since there’s no real narrative, just an attempt to describe sex in a fairly soft-focus, vanilla sort of way.

On the other hand, one of the writers I most admire, CelliaIsAliena, commented (on the Girls version):

"An impressive piece of narrative erotic poetry! It begins so quietly, I didn't anticipate the build-up in the imagery and passion as the poem proceeds. It's rather a daring strategy, the way the sophistication of the poem's diction and imagery accelerates with the escalation of the lovemaking. The result is a passionate and very vividly-detailed ride, one worth following carefully through to the end!"

So maybe they're better than I give them credit for.

Topic Whatever happened to Oceanrunner?
Posted 10 Dec 2017 14:25

He sent a message to his friends, telling them what he was doing, and why. I respect his decision.

I also remember several people leaving in a huff when the incest category was removed for a while, a couple of years ago. You can never please everybody.

Topic Would you have coffee or tea with the person above you?
Posted 10 Dec 2017 12:14

Why don't we make a pot? That should be enough for three! 🙄

Topic Almost Famous
Posted 10 Dec 2017 12:11

Moving off-topic slightly, my old story "Schoolgirl Dares With Sarah" is now my second Legendary story! 100,043 hits!

Moving it into the new "Teen" category seems to have given it a bit of a boost. It's a cheeky little tale of exhibitionism and flashing. If that's your thing, you might enjoy it.

Topic Today in Pictures (post a picture representing your mood)
Posted 10 Dec 2017 04:32

https://upload.lushstories.com/1521350918-IMG_20171130_154012.jpg

Topic Skinny dipping with the lush member above
Posted 09 Dec 2017 23:55

Tiptoeing in; in case it's cold lol

Topic NaughtyAnnie’s Cavalcade of Naughtyness
Posted 09 Dec 2017 14:08

Here's the next one...

“At Night, Two Birds”

First published - 12 June 2011

Category – College Sex

Number of reads to date – 36,253

Link - https://www.lushstories.com/stories/college-sex/at-night-two-birds.aspx

Badges – Famous Story

Reader comments:

"A cheery tale with lots of cheeky humour and rambunctious sex appeal!"

"Very nice good characters, very believable even the squirting"

"What a yummy morning treat to read. It was sort of innocent but really really sexy too. Loved it"

"I got hard just thinking about your sweet young puss the way you make your panties look oh i think i will make cock cum looking at your sweet young ass love your sweet panties"

….

This was the first story that I wrote specifically for Lush. After having had some good feedback for my first story, “Wet Mountain”, I decided I wanted to write another one and see how that did. And after writing a “straight” story, I wanted to try my hand at a lesbian one.

Following the time-honoured formula of “write about what you know”, it is set in the student flats of an unnamed university, very much like the ones I was living in at the time. Although it features two girl students having sex, at the time my experience of lesbian sex was fairly small, and restricted to little more than a few girlish experiments. But I had a vivid imagination.

The “Annie” in this story is a rather more sexually confident version of me – or at least as I was six years ago, when this was written. In some ways, I was more like the Louise character, but I wanted to write a story in which I took the lead – trying to more assertive in my own life, I suppose. And maybe, looking back, I just wanted to be seduced by someone confident and sexy like the “story Annie”, who would show me what two girls can get up to together.

Would I write it the same way now? No, probably not. Although it’s got some of the same characteristics of my later stories, like the use of humour to set the scene, I’m not sure if the steam-of-conscious style, interspersed with personal asides, really works. It seems a bit affected to me now, but that was how I wrote it at the time, so it can stay like that.

If the story can be said to have any special features, it would have to be the “squirting” at the end. I’m pretty sure this is only there because I’d seen it on some internet porn, and it looked like a fun thing to introduce in a story. The actual focus of the story is all about the slow seduction and undressing, but I thought it needed a more interesting climax, and the squirting was supposed to do that.

One final obscure fact. The title is an oblique reference to a novel by the Irish writer Flann O’Brien, called “At Swim-Two-Birds”, which I’d recently been reading (he gets a name-check in the story, too). I don’t suppose anyone else got it, but the title’s okay anyway, so I’m not going to change it now.

Topic Matt Lauer... women, would you still do him?
Posted 08 Dec 2017 22:34

I'd do him with my knee, right between the legs.

PS Should say that I had to Google him first, to find out he's another filthy groper. I'd guess most British have no idea who he is. Lucky us.

Topic have you ever tried fucking yourself with a cucumber ?
Posted 08 Dec 2017 13:45

Yes. I stretched a condom over it to help with lubrication. It filled me right up. Bliss.

Topic Rest in Peace: August Ames
Posted 07 Dec 2017 15:15

This is sad.

And if anyone on here doubts that online abuse and personal attacks can drive you to this state of desperation, let me assure you that it can.

Topic Where would you like to be right now?
Posted 05 Dec 2017 14:49

In bed with Ginger 😊

Topic Would you like a 3some with the 2 members Above You.....Yes or No?
Posted 05 Dec 2017 14:35

I think we'd make a good trio...

Topic Have you ever caught a guy staring lustingly at your boobs or ass
Posted 04 Dec 2017 22:38

Yes to my boobs. But it's usually when I'm not wearing a bra, so only to be expected.

I'm sure they look at my bum too, but that's harder to spot lol.

Topic Would you like a 3some with the 2 members Above You.....Yes or No?
Posted 04 Dec 2017 22:27

Yes, definitely. I'm sure it'd be fun.

Topic Is it normal for a story to "get away" from the writer's planned outline, and sort of write itself?
Posted 03 Dec 2017 19:32

Yes, this sometimes happens to me. I blame the characters. Once I've given them life on the page, they develop minds of their own, and start trying to influence the way the story's going.

Sometimes I'm strict, and make them do what I want. Other times, it's easier to let them have their own way. Ungrateful bastards lol.

Topic Would You Strip Search the Member Above you?
Posted 03 Dec 2017 06:49

Oh yes! Intimately. All afternoon... ☝☝☝☝☝

To Julie.

Who is so right about the timing lol.

Topic Would You Strip Search the Member Above you?
Posted 03 Dec 2017 06:13

I would respectfully pass.
Unfortunately it is always about timing these posts and who is above you.

I'd love to have you above me, Julie xxx ;)

Topic Would you like a 3some with the 2 members Above You.....Yes or No?
Posted 02 Dec 2017 14:29

Can't we all just pile in together? I think my bed can take it...

Topic Would You Strip Search the Member Above you?
Posted 02 Dec 2017 04:52

Mmm, yes. Every inch of her.

Topic Sissy Boyfriends
Posted 28 Nov 2017 20:55

If I gave her the wool, would she make me one too?

Topic Have you fucked or been fucked at Work or on the premise at Work?
Posted 27 Nov 2017 10:31

I still blush internally whenever I use a certain meeting room. At least the stain on the carpet doesn't show too badly. Unless you know it's there.

Topic You have caught the person above you masturbating. What do you do?
Posted 27 Nov 2017 10:25

Leave the restaurant immediately.

Topic Say Something NICE about the Person/Profile Above You
Posted 27 Nov 2017 10:19

She's a sophisticated lady, with gorgeous legs.

Topic Would you like a 3some with the 2 members Above You.....Yes or No?
Posted 26 Nov 2017 06:24

I wish that was me with ginger and fletch. So I could lick all that freshly-made semen off her gorgeous body.

Topic Would You Strip Search the Member Above you?
Posted 25 Nov 2017 11:56

Mmm, yes. A full body examination would be needed...

Sorry, but that was meant for Ginger lol.

Topic What's the last thing you put in your mouth?
Posted 24 Nov 2017 19:49

My sticky fingers.

😆