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if anyone would be interested to read please message me and i will send it for your review - when finished i will also be posting the story to this site :-)
I have been reading stories on the site for a long time but only registered a short while ago, I need help to be able to do my story like some of the wonderful ones i frequently read.As part of a book club im a member of we are all writing "Short Stories" to be read by the other members we have covered erotic fiction before so several people are writing about relationships/dates etc. I have decided to write about a rather romantic date i went on many years ago. I have written 4 pages though I feel what i have done is too slow - i would love to make it flow like some of the stories on this site though im worried its too slow building up to the sex not descriptive enough and boring. I could desperately do with some help. I want to make an impression on my fellow club members and would be so grateful if anyone might want to read it or give me any help.Also as its a real story do i leave names etc in or change them?Page 1 - my morning - travelling to the date meetingPage 2 - dinner out, theatre, back to herspage 3 - sexpage 4 - sex/next morningThanks all for any help.
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