I'm a rockabilly southern punk with a longing for passion and desire in all things mysterious. In this time of beauty worship and materialism, I wish for love letters written by hand and the whispers of poetry on a moist summer night. Erotica is a thing of the mind. I want to explore that with you.
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Once again my apologies if this is already mentioned but, more mobile based site. Mobile is the future and right now i'm on a driod and have a difficult time reading stories. I have to scroll around all the stuff to the left and right and all the drop downs in the main navigation are a mobile no-no. Once again, all with respect to the fantastic job you are doing.
I think you do a fantastic job of maintaining a free website dedicated to erotic writing (aka porn). However, just like our writing there is always room for improvement and I haven't read through all the posts here so please forgive me if there is something repeating.In regards to authors and writing:1. Have a more extensive way to review and rate stories. What I mean is that currently there are stars but among the authors I've spoken to this is often not even regarded as accurate. We all know that an incest story, for example, will get 4 to 50 times the rating that an extremely well written and extremely erotic story will get. It seems if there was a way to have reviewers of stories that are both "professional" and then "user reviews" like movies. Also have different ways for people to review a story. So maybe there is a basic option like you have now but also an advanced option where you can rate the story, the character development, the erotic hotness, the author's use of plot, etc. That way when you filtering stories, it makes it easier to find certain stories...like those with a good plot and also ratings start to have more meaning to an author and help them improve their writing ability.2. Have a way for people to list "favorites" of stories. That way, if I trust another person's tastes, it makes it easier for me to find other stories that I may like and that way I can weed through the millions of stories that are probably not my cup of tea. For the site:Have groups that users can join with their own message board. There is another adult website that does this and I've found it extremely well done and useful. It allows you to share posts and images about topics related to that group. So a group could be writers of stories with plots and character development. Then we could pick out stories that we think have plots and character development and share them. This would help some stories that are well written have a longer shelf life and keep them from getting completely buried under all the incest stories.One last thing would be adding more functionality to following people and authors. So for example, if I'm following 10 authors, when they post new stories I would get a little list on my account page that would show me all the latest stories they've written. So in effect allowing me to create my own personal Lush homepage of stories. Also, I could go to their own favs page and see the list of authors they are following and start to make even more connections. This would allow for serious and strong writers to start to connect more easily and allow for more serious writing to shine above...yes...the incest stories.Just had to get one last stab in there about the incest stories.But honestly, for a free site. Amazing. Nothing else like it on the web. Love it. Lush it.
...individually wrapped mints or individually wrapped anything. She wasn't afraid anymore, they were finally alone. All the years of waiting and now they were alone together. Her breathing became shallow. Her mind raced. He was about to kiss her when he took out THAT and put it over his...
Great, I'm happy to do the same for you or anyone who just wants another opinion. Looking forward to getting some feedback, even if it's not all good. I just want to improve as a writer so any help is great. Thanks!
"A bit airy..." remarked the American. It took me a minute to get it as well, LOL. I think the problem is that no American would say "A bit..." that's very English and I don't think they would say "airy" either. I think it would probably have worked better if you had someone British say the first part, perhaps from London?I think an American would say, "It's a little windy huh?" but then that don't work with yer joke, now does it?Ok, now that we've thoroughly picked this joke apart...ummm...LOL?
Happy 4th Everyone! Looks like it's going to be a beautiful day for everyone on the East coast. Anyone out my way just drop on by. :-)
I thought it would be nice for any writers looking to find critiques and/or reviews of their work strictly for the sake of improving their writing skills and story telling abilities to have a place to post their story links and then ask for reviews. I think it would be nice for reviews to be sent directly to the person rather than posted here. What do you think?I posted a rather long story, meant to build several characters and then bring those characters together in an orgy situation. I personally find it difficult to get even remotely aroused unless I feel like I know the characters and have some window into their lives. So I thought it would be good to build that story, establish who the people were and then bring them together. Did I succeed? I don't know. Perhaps some of you might take a moment and let me know?First Chapter:http://www.lushstories.com/stories/incest/angelas-night-chapter-01.aspxFinal wrap up:http://www.lushstories.com/stories/group-sex/angelas-night-conclusion.aspxI hope to find other writers with strong story telling interests online as well. By story telling I mean that the writer has a idea of where they are taking the story and their intention is to bring the reader along on a journey. I believe all good art, writing, music, literature, or visual arts must focus on connecting with something deeper in the human spirit. I look forward to finding others with such a passion. Thanks for your time.
Wow, I'm just impressed you could work in the bible and the end of the world into two women kissing. That's awesome! I bet Nostradamus never saw that one comin' and the book of revelations, the horsemen; famine, pestilence, death, and two women kissing. <img src="/forum/images/emoticons/icon_geek.gif" alt="geek"> Thanks for the fun topic, God bless ya and may he have you rub your tits together as you tongue fuck your best friend, bless your little heart. <img src="/forum/images/emoticons/f-hihi.gif" alt="f-hihi">
Congrats Daisy, excellent! I write at the computer at home usually in the mornings or late at night. I write because if I don't write the stories still play out in my head. I see new people, new things and story ideas just start flowing. I have more stories in my head than I'll ever be able to write down. I do have dreams of being a well published author one day but I'm an artist for a living and doing art for money sucked the life out of art for me. Nothing like having other people telling you what is good to pretty much kill any creative energy and the art world is so trendy that it's hard to keep up. I feel a bit like the kid in art school confidential sometimes.It's been fun writing and having no stress behind it. I enjoy just writing a story for myself and having others read it and sometimes relate. It's also nice to read others work and talk about it without the fear of money, not making money, not making enough money...ugh. utopia on lush!
Can we collide with the Goddess and not the planet? Better yet, can we watch while the God Mars and the Goddess Venus collide and then roll around and collide some more? See, life is so much better with a dirty mind.
Dominique had burst into my life in a storm of black leggings, shorts punk-rock skirts, and cute little jewelry. I knew my heart was lost in her, but had no idea if my heart was safe with her. The other night my heart had been crushed while standing in the dark street below her apartment. A stuffy business suited man had trodden through her apartment as much as he had trodden on my soul. Now...
Added 05 May 2011 | Category Reluctance
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I stood outside her door. I was afraid.Afraid of what she might say or not say. I questioned why I was at her place. I tried to imagine what her place looked like and couldn't. Dominique was alternative. She had a new color of hair for every week and clothes that drove me insane. What would her place look like? Dominique had piercings all around both ears and a pierced bottom lip, not to...
Added 22 Jan 2011 | Category Fetish
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Dominique hadn't been in school for twodays. The desk beside me sat empty and void of her smell, her smile, and her funky rattling jewelry. I missed the way she always borrowed my pencil. I missed her little giggle when she saw I was hard in class again. Most of all, I missed her reaching over and touching me. I felt lost in class. I felt like my life had no meaning without her there. It had...
Added 13 Jan 2011 | Category Reluctance
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At this moment I was having one ofthose weird outer body experiences. My mind was trying to process what I was seeing in front of me but wires weren't connected. Maybe I should explain. I had left school and was headed for the art club house. The art club is a geek club where a few friends of mine gather in this old house and we talk about movies, books, comics, and the existence...
Added 11 Jan 2011 | Category Reluctance
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The new girl in school, Dominique,straddled me. I could smell her skin. I could feel her body heat just above my skin. The hairs on my body stood erect. I stood erect. The little top she was wearing was cut just below her breasts. Her tight little stomach quivered as she ran her fingers down my body. She thrust her hips forward and I could see the outline of her pussy clearing in her panties....
Added 07 Jan 2011 | Category Reluctance
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Dominique was like some little GothicLolita that burst into my life and electrified every molecule of air around me. She was perfect in every way possible. But just as suddenly as I noticed her, so did every other guy in my class. Everyone notices a new girl at school. I knew, in that moment, that I had no chance. I put my head back on my desk and half listened as she was introduced. I half...
Added 05 Jan 2011 | Category Reluctance
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Jill heard them honking the horn and almost opened the door. She stopped, turned as if she was about to go back into her room, stopped, turned back to the door, stopped, turned, stopped...finally she took a deep breath and opened the door and stepped outside. Her hands tried to cover herself but there was too much skin to cover so she let her hand drop. “Holy fuckin' shit.” Cliff said...
Added 02 Jan 2011 | Category Group Sex
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Father Paul saw Angela's car turn into the drive way. His heart quickened and his hands started to shake. He tried to look busy with his plants and pretend that he didn't notice her. He heard the tires crunch on the gravel in front of the house. “Please Lord, give me the strength to resist this temptation. Please give me the strength. Please. Please.” Father Paul prayed. He heard the car...
Added 23 Dec 2010 | Category Reluctance
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Ben flipped Angela's invitation over in his hands a few times. He couldn't understand why she would invite him to her party. Was it some kind of trick? Maybe Angela and her whore roommate were planning some kind of revenge? No, that couldn't be it. If they wanted revenge they could have had it a long time ago. After all, he was fucking Gitane, the whore roommate. God, that girl did know how...
Added 19 Dec 2010 | Category Straight Sex
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Jill was naked and bound. Nervously she peered about the room at the men who wanted to fuck her. Jill felt the uneven grain of the worn wood floor boards beneath her knees and curled her toes to get a better purchase in case she needed to spring up suddenly. She cupped her naked breasts tightly with her hands to cover herself. The supple white flesh of her large soft breasts crushed...
Added 15 Dec 2010 | Category Exhibitionism
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