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As I awaken your vision recedes from my mind.

You are like a new dawn, My sunlight breaking the horizon.

A dew drop glittering in the morning sun, reminds me of the light from your beautiful blue eyes.

That perfect summer's glade, reminds me of the peace you brought to my restless spirit.

A mother helping her child after a fall, reminds me of your tender soul.

An erupting volcano is like the fire in your heart.

A sense of foreboding descends upon me.

I open my eyes and you are gone the loss becomes real again.

Through my self pity and loss I still stare at where you used to sleep and thank you for being part of my life.

You brought me back to life when all seemed lost.

And although you are lost to me I know that we will be happy again.

I will always love you.

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