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When you're in love you surrender
Looking into their eyes, your heart skips a beat
Forever and always between you, heat
The imperfections become perfection
You throw everything aside for them, nothing else matters.
You surrender to each other.

And when nothing else matters, the little things are forgotten
Just the happiness between you that is always begotten
You want everything from each other
Everything that you have to give is theirs and everything they have to give is yours
The tears, the smiles, the tantrums and laughter
Through the hottest of droughts and the meanest of storms
You surrender

Sweet dreams and nightmares you will endure
People’s opinions you will abjure
You would do anything for them
Nothing is too much and nothing is too little
Seeing them smile reminds you why you’re here and who you are
You surrender to the moment

You surrender to the happiness
You surrender to the sadness
You surrender to the fire and you surrender to the ice
You surrender to the emotions and you surrender to each other

You cannot run and hide anymore
This is love, and you will surrender
For each other, you will.

Author's Note: This is my first poem (if one can call it that) I'd love to have your feedback on my musings and I'd love to know what you think.
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All characters and situations are fictitious, any likeness to living person(s) is purely coincidental and not intended to harm. All characters in this story are over the legal age of consent. {2016}

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