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Surrender II

Tags: kiss, head, licking
Naz's response to Hotstuff's poem, Surrender I

Your lips over mine
ignite a fire
I hold you close
energy transmitting
our bodies close
as dawn glows

I push my tongue
into your hot mouth
our tongues swirl
desires mounting

I bite your bottom lip
and hear a moan
I whisper in your ear
how much I love you
arousing the urge
to merge more

I squeeze your lovely breasts
fondling them hard
I suck your nipple
creating vacuum
arching your back
ask to suck more
I nibble and bite
your hard nipple
you scream aloud

I lick your belly button
you start sweating
my hands travel
down between your thighs
feeling you aroused
I lick your slit
wet and warm
oozing juices

I spread your pussy lips
slurping I taste
the pussy juices
sweet and salty
it makes you wither

I push my tongue in
your pussy oozes more
I lick your clit
flicking it with my tongue
I nibble your clit

In ecstasy
you scream aloud
oozing still more
I swallow all
the juices you ooze
slurping the elixir

your hands rub my cock
and squeeze it hard
you lick my cockhead
and taste my precum
my cock is hard

You open your mouth
and lick my cock
salivating on the tip
you take it more
into your open mouth
deep to your throat

Your tongue swirls
over my hard cock
sending me to heaven
I grunt aloud
that makes you ooze
still more

I pull your head hard
over my cock
arching my back
I desiring you lick more
you urge me to enter
your sweet wet pussy
obliging I push in slow
you’re moaning aloud

I nibble your nipple
my cock slides slow in
your wet warm pussy
my hard cock
now balls deep
you scream aloud

I stay still
letting you adjust
my length and girth
you urge aloud
move fast and deep

I oblige pounding you hard
thrusting deep and fast
you moan louder
and bite my bottom lip
in pleasure and lust
digging your nails
into my back

In ecstasy and pleasure
you feel me deep
as I move fast and hard
you cum hard
convulsing and flooding
your love juices
over my hard cock

You close your eyes
and wrap your legs
around my waist
and pull me
deeper in and kiss me

Urging me to cum
deep in the pussy
you squeeze your
pussy muscles
and make me cum
hard and spurt my seed
hot and thick
deep in your pussy

I grunt aloud and kiss hard
biting your bottom lip
you hold me tight
making me feel
we are one

Love holds us close
one and complete
mixing our cum
kissing and swirling tongues
together we enjoy
the afterglow

A fulfilling sex
gift to us
a pleasuring sex
binds our bodies

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