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You Had Me At Hello

You had me at hello
You had me at hello

The crinkle of your smile
The softness of your eyes
The palest blue of summer skies

You had me at the first handshake
Firm, warm, the touch of a lover
Leaving me wanting more
To discover everything about you

You had me with your first glance
Passion I'd not seen before
Short of breath, I felt the floor
Whirl away beneath my feet

You had me at the first dance
Holding me close, my head at rest
Your heartbeat firm beneath your breast
Hoping the song would never end

You had me at the first caress
Your touch against my evening dress
Smoothing, soothing, electrifying
Wanting more, my mind in turmoil

You had me at the first kiss
Dizzying me, sending me reeling
Feeling complete, the jigsaw done
Butterflies rising inside me

You had me at first sight
I still recall that wondrous night
Tipsy on the feelings within
Bathed in the love only two can make

You had me at hello

You have me, still

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