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CherryRedGirl
Over 90 days ago
Heteroflexible Cis Female
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Quote by Simmerdownchick


Life doesn't always have a happy ending, true, but I read and watch movies to escape, I don't wanna be hit with a tragedy at the end. "City of Angels", "Edward Scissor Hands", "Message in a Bottle", "Garp" I could go on and on. At the end I always feel like I wasted two hours to feel depressed. No thank you.



That is exactly what I would want to avoid. Hmm...
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Quote by Burquette
In one of my writing classes, the professor told us, "The ending doesn't have to be expected, but it should be inevitable."

I always took that to mean, don't force it. If you have a cheerful tone and cheerful characters, you need to carefully set up a sad ending. If you don't, it will look gimmicky, at best.


Yes, this is what I was thinking but I couldn't find the right word for it.... I definitely would not like that. I will for sure put a lot of thought into the ending and make sure it is the right ending for the story.
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Quote by Burquette
In one of my writing classes, the professor told us, "The ending doesn't have to be expected, but it should be inevitable."

I always took that to mean, don't force it. If you have a cheerful tone and cheerful characters, you need to carefully set up a sad ending. If you don't, it will look gimmicky, at best.


Yes, this is what I was thinking but I couldn't find the right word for it.... I definitely would not like that. I will for sure put a lot of thought into the ending and make sure it is the right ending for the story.
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Well, I think if I didn't include that ending I would still be happy with my story. It was just a "what if" that popped into my head.

Thanks for the reply, I'll be sure to check out your story. smile
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I'm writing a new story which may fit into the love stories category and want to take a risk. As in a break up of sorts leaving off in a cliffhanger at the end of the story. Is this a bad idea? If you were reading, would you like the ending, or hate it? Would it just kill the mood entirely and make you reluctant to read more of the story? Or would it do the opposite and make you want to continue reading to find out if the lovers ever get back together? Do you care about these things when reading erotica, or just want hot sex scenes and not to get bummed out?

The last thing I'd want to do is make readers lose interest in my story on the very last line.

Could use some help and opinions. Thank you in advance smile
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When I was a youngin', I stumbled upon a trashy, 2 minute BRAZZERS video, that terrified and excited me at the same time. And it all went downhill from there.
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That it's okay to have casual sex, but to think about if you would regret it later on, think about if he "deserves" you.
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Girls are usually more open to experimentation, so maybe it's because it's more "normal". Also, two girls making out makes them seem more feminine, while two guys making out looks less "masculine"? Not my opinion but I assume that's part of the reasoning.
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Quote by Nikki703
Why would anyone be turned on by seeing a woman covered with fake cum?


Or real cum for that matter.

I do not have a cum fetish. Let's face it, cum is gross.
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I personally wouldn't like it. I'd be too jealous and insecure. But I'm selfish... I want my man to let me fuck another man
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With girl friends, the occasional nip slip we've seen of each other but never fully nude. And with guy friends, well if I saw them nude there's a good chance we were friends with benefits.
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I've never really paid attention I guess.... But he favours my left boob for some reason lol
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At least once a day, if not more. The week before and after my period, I need it like... once every hour lol
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I love it. I love baby dolls, matching bra and panties, and garters and thigh-high pantyhose. I love dressing up for myself, because it makes me feel sexy and more confident, but I also love the look on his face when he sees me in it. I loveeee lingerie and I love modeling it.
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Quote by pat278


I'd love an audience!!! You can help me and instruct me on how to properly suck a cock.


Hell yeah I'd love to