I must admit after reading a story i just want to say that i liked it so much . it so much harder to say what you didn't like. as for voting i think maybe people just think oh well it's just a number and us writer's are always more interested in words. I did a creative writing course last year with the Open University and don't think some people where keen to hear whats bad about their writing. I think all comments are ok good or bad you can learn from it all, thats if your serious about being a writer.
Me being English I have no idea what ramen noodles are haha I watched a film last week and thought what the hell are tootsie rolls haha. I have to say my fave snacks at night time after a few can's of Foster's are either a tin of bolognaise meatballs or philadelphia and cucumber without the green skin, or if i had a man i would eat him all up all night haha LOL
ha ha ha ha ha ha that last line is so funny haha lol nice one!
Yeah nice one Chefkathleen I totally agree with you, you can't keep a good B down she has to much inner confidence inside and always stands up for who she is.
I'm so grateful to have come across Lush its more than story reading its a place where I can find resources to improve my writing. I have never understood grammar all that great, I either out too many or too little commas in a story and as for all the other symbols that go with grammar its like a whole new game of instructions.
hiya Jackoffjecht what a great line, it really does make you sit and think.
Didn't realise so many of you guys and gals where from America. Me near Manchester England its been minus 2 today and it's been snowing walked to Tesco's brrrrrrrrrrrrrr so cold that wind, apparently more snow is on it's way great haha.
Ohh there all so funny, the pole pictures in Paris very good idea. why don't we have anything like that in the UK. Love the bags as well brilliant.
Funny reply Asubtlepassion haha very funny indeed
Awe thank-you very much redwolf
Inspired to write a poem this afternoon after reading all the poems in Lush.
My Lyrical latin Lover.
By SweetHoney000
Lying there both in emotional bliss
Her lying in my arms
Her head resting on my chest
Her listening to my heart beat
Her hand snaked around my waist
Her leg up and over my loins
I kiss her hair
We fall asleep
All night
Till one of us moves
His head resting under her chin
Her arms around his head
Her lips kiss his salty forehead
His breath warm against my breasts
A hot tear slinding down my cheek
We stir to hold and kiss each other again
Making love like two magnets holding us close
In unison with heart body and soul
Hope you like this all comments welcome thanks xxx
A perfect patner always lets you orgasm first there's nothing that says they care more when they put your needs first.
