Looking for help with punctuation

I am trying to get a story approved by lush but I need help editing. Any help would be appreciated.

i am a writer and love writing erotica. i want to create this group to give writers new ideas (and myself) of what to write. i am in a bit of a writers block and this would help clear it up.

If you would like to have a friendly, sexy, healthy or just get to know someone a little better, lets chat about life and dreams and fatasies and fetishes, and our likes and dislikes and interests... about what ever we want to discuss. Agroup for open discussion