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vatsyaya
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I see that the space between paragraphs in many stories are very very big. Can something be done about this?

Just imagine an excited reader like me desperately trying to read the story intensely and suddenly you come across such a huge gap between paragraphs. Even milli seconds matter while reading erotic stories..Thanks


It's the way authors have submitted the stories to us Vats.

The text is displayed according to how authors submit the stories - hence if they don't format them correctly, just copying and pasting from M$ word or some program where they might have been double line spaced, they are highly likely to look poor on our site.

It's best to put stories in a plain txt program like notepad or wordpad first, and formatting them correctly there prior to uploading.


Thanks Lush! ( Honestly I almost forgot that I had posted this message )
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Ow my ears!

Is this seriously intended to excite anyone? He's taking so long over everything, and she looks like she's falling asleep! It's rather I guess it must be meant for a female audience



Everything? LOL!

Everything is not allowed by the Censor Board in India. Even films like these have stopped coming now, thanks to our politicians. Hmmmm!
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Don't worry about the annoying music. We shut our ears and open our eyes always..LOL
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We actively encourage people to make comments on stories, whether it's constructive criticism, words of kindness or a well done, however like all open forums, there will inevitably be some abuse of the system.

If you come across some over the top comments, please report the comment to us - we will be adding a link next to the comments box so it's easy to do. Until that's set up, please feel free just to use the feedback form, and myself or another admin will look into it.

Cheers,

~ Lush ~


I am very happy to know that the site is taking up the rude comments very seriously. I have earlier posted a message to let people post their comments only if they register. Although that doesn't guarantee decency from cowards, at least there is a scope that the member can be contacted by the webmasters in case of abuse.

It is not necessary that everybody should like every story posted. But, the writers expect the readers to be a bit reasonable while conveying their disdain. Writers would welcome any criticism if it sounds credible and genuine. After all, who doesn't want to improve?
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What a shameless girl to advertise her double barrelled availability.
Tut tut what would Mummy say


Is there a picture of the same girl showing her back?
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From the impressions along the waistline, I presume she still had some clothes? How on earth?


You could hitch her skirt up even if she was wearing a belt, which would cause that imprint....not that I'd know anything about bending women over a bonnet of a car or anything....


I presume there can be only two conclusions. one, don't have a car and let the wife drive. Two, have as many cars but not a single wife.
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From the impressions along the waistline, I presume she still had some clothes? How on earth?
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Most of my ideas come from my life. I've evidently been one of 'those' people who other's trust to tell their problems too. I guess having a sympathetic ear has helped too. Anyway, over the years I've witnessed, seen, been told, or heard about umpteenth hand different stories and I managed to keep them in mind.

I also catch the news of the day when it's a human interest story, and a little from other places as well.

In reality, there is nothing new under the sun when it comes to humans and relationships. Well, not to date at any rate. Perhaps, someday when man is traveling the stars triumphant they will come across alien life forms and learn more yet. Until then...


I am in total agreement. In everybody's real life there are several hidden ideas. I have lot of experiences but don't have the skill to post everything as stories.
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In real life I am supposed to be a hardworking accountant although I hardly work nowadays. I know the three basic principles of being busy at work. 1. Keep your computer switched on all the time. 2. Never keep the table clean. 3. Never keep the files in their respective places or else your boss will locate it the moment he needs.
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I see that the space between paragraphs in many stories are very very big. Can something be done about this?

Just imagine an excited reader like me desperately trying to read the story intensely and suddenly you come across such a huge gap between paragraphs. Even milli seconds matter while reading erotic stories..Thanks
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Honestly speaking, writing an erotic story is the most difficult task under the sun. Realistically speaking, the action is more or less similar in most stories and apart from a few modifications here and there, a writer can't do much about it. That is why writing erotic story is so difficult yet rewarding. Being a male, I must confess that I always rate those stories very high that make me stop in between looking for relief. By that yardstick, I must say that your story is very very very very very exciting! ( please count the number of 'very's ). Good work!
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