From the impressions along the waistline, I presume she still had some clothes? How on earth?
I wonder what do they do when they go out for a date?
In real life I am supposed to be a hardworking accountant although I hardly work nowadays. I know the three basic principles of being busy at work. 1. Keep your computer switched on all the time. 2. Never keep the table clean. 3. Never keep the files in their respective places or else your boss will locate it the moment he needs.
I see that the space between paragraphs in many stories are very very big. Can something be done about this?
Just imagine an excited reader like me desperately trying to read the story intensely and suddenly you come across such a huge gap between paragraphs. Even milli seconds matter while reading erotic stories..Thanks
Honestly speaking, writing an erotic story is the most difficult task under the sun. Realistically speaking, the action is more or less similar in most stories and apart from a few modifications here and there, a writer can't do much about it. That is why writing erotic story is so difficult yet rewarding. Being a male, I must confess that I always rate those stories very high that make me stop in between looking for relief. By that yardstick, I must say that your story is very very very very very exciting! ( please count the number of 'very's ). Good work!
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