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Sometimes a girl should stand and fight; sometimes she shouldn’t.
Sometimes a girl should stand and fight; sometimes she shouldn’t.

Sometimes she needs to take a break; needs to drop everything and recover.

It’s not running away when you know how to fix yourself.

Fifteen hours: two taxis, one flight.

A scribbled address.

A surprise visit.

Late night arrival.

A house in darkness.

Embarrassment. No alternative.

Quiet knocking.

A light.

No questions. No words. Gentle acceptance.

A warm embrace.

Tears. So many tears.

Two empty mugs. Two empty glasses. An empty bottle.

One bed. Six legs. Intertwined.

Arms holding. Lips kissing.

Legs opening. Cock thrusting. Fingers rubbing. Muscles clenching.

Recovery starting…

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Comments(19)


sweet_as_candy
Posted 12 May 2013 13:00
Wow, perfectly captured. Such few lines to tell a story full of such emotion. Bravo!
Jinxy
Posted 08 May 2013 09:12
This is touching. Simple, wonderful and a lot of meaning in so few words.
flytoomuch
Posted 06 May 2013 01:27
Recovery, renewal, "the green fuse that....." Amazing! I loved it.

She
Posted 05 May 2013 01:16
This was briliant! My first of yours, I believe..very impresive writing, I am mesmerized by it.
HK4167
Posted 04 May 2013 23:32
This is such a wonderful poem! Believe it or not I really counted 101 words lol...Great work!

Buz
Posted 04 May 2013 21:29
Beautifully written Abigail! A solid superb 5+ and congratulations on the RR Award for it! Great work!

Poppet
Posted 04 May 2013 18:06
Such a wonderful poem. I read it the other day and grabbed my attention. I had to leave a comment. Well done.
CeliaisAliena
Posted 04 May 2013 11:17
Minimalist mystery and delicacy, a promise of new beginnings (and, via sprite, another kind of long distance game too!). A swift, evocative plunge into new emotions and sensations.

Dancing_Doll
Posted 04 May 2013 06:48
A complete story told in few words. Beautifully written.
nazhinaz
Posted 03 May 2013 22:54
"Recovery starting" is confident conclusion. 5
beowulf69
Posted 03 May 2013 21:11
great stuff!!
Coco
Posted 03 May 2013 21:08
LauraLee read my mind...
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 03 May 2013 18:27
lovely... mysterious... healing... yes.

Saga
Posted 03 May 2013 17:22
This was wonderful.

naughtyannie
Posted 03 May 2013 14:47
Just what all these other lovely people have said! And I love how you give that final twist in just the two words "six legs".

Tashtego
Posted 03 May 2013 14:03
I really, really like this. Such elegant economy. Beautiful.

Mazza
Posted 03 May 2013 13:24
Fantastic. I love your minimal use of words and the way it allows you to fill in the blanks...

Less is so much more.

Simply wonderful x

Liz
Posted 03 May 2013 13:18
A perfect example of why you are one of my favourite writers. A tale, distilled to all it needs to be. Well done Abi! You're a star!
sprite
Posted 03 May 2013 13:06
probably because this hits so close to home, but i love this piece. it tells so much in so few words, not just the story of a few hours, but of a friendship, a life, 3 lives, really, intertwined. thank you for sharing your beautiful words, Abi. all 101 and one of them.
 

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