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Messy Love

Drops of salt and sugar and cream and sunlight

They will say
that my sheets are in need of
laundry.
They see stains that will glow
in purple light,
the DNA of a long torso
divided into sections
forming individual boxes
of sinew,
of muscle.
Moving.
My small hands
feeling
the dampness
at the curve of a massive back.
Moving.
Always moving, touching, adrift.
A patch of fine hair trailing.
Much like
a cobweb of truths and lies,
expectation calling
a rhythm bubbling
like water
over heated.
The pink of perfection,
flesh protrudes
with a road map of veins
to a helmet meant for friction--
my purple light
in the night does not have to glow.
At that moment I know where it is.
A blood filled thing
with a slit meant for sliding
drops of salt and sugar and cream and sunlight,
a promise
before the rain
that my hips rose up to meet.
My ass
round and firm
in your strong grasp.
Push, pull, thrust.
And, you rained in me as
I quivered on the inside,
shook like a mountain
with an unstable foundation
--earth shifting beneath us.
Winter turning into Spring.
A bud hard and pulsating
exploded into a flower.
We experienced a life span
of after shocks
in a matter of minutes.
Pause.
Time, stand still.
You cannot capture a moving thing
whirling.
Your love whirled with mine
like our legs intertwined.
There is an overflow.
Afterwards,
my cheek rested against your chest.
Your arms surrounded me
as I listened to you breathe.
A rising and a falling.
Sleep is a well earned thing.
I am leaking
a combined sweetness
that can be smelt in the air.
They see stains on a reputation
of thread count
hidden by a comforter.
I see a one body
that is two
and
the sweet messy love
of a night
completely
lived.

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Comments(27)

EroticElegance
Posted 01 Aug 2012 01:18
Again, another Master Piece!
openzipper
Posted 02 Apr 2012 08:34
Exceptional...thanks for the vivid picture

Frank_Lee
Posted 12 Mar 2012 11:11
Just came back to revisit this...my first introduction to one of my very favorite voices...and the astonishment is just as strong.
playsit
Posted 12 Mar 2012 07:59
What a beautiful picture of love and contentment, wonderfully written.

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stephanie
Posted 11 Feb 2012 05:03
"And, you rained in me"..... How fucking beautiful is that???!!!??? 5 xx SF
VickieLynn1
Posted 25 Jan 2012 08:17
yes. such power of great love through sex
mickeyfinn1
Posted 24 Jan 2012 13:19
beautifully composed and from the heart. absolutely loved it!
Kazzykane
Posted 24 Jan 2012 10:53
Beautifully written, carefully composed and spellbinding! Please do more.
Ianthomas
Posted 11 Dec 2011 15:57
Yeah fine stuff - not sure that you do winter though!
Makavelli
Posted 03 Dec 2011 16:23
I Love It! Thanks for sharing!
VanityBaby
Posted 16 Nov 2011 20:25
That was a very artistically created poem, BRAVO!!

Michael
Posted 15 Nov 2011 06:11
You paint a beautiful erotic image. I do like how you brought it to a sweet ending with "of a night completely lived".

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Eternal_Lover
Posted 15 Nov 2011 03:34
little different good work
Solarmeatman
Posted 05 Nov 2011 15:12
I am very impressed...and feel an attraction to your ohhh so sexxxy mind....it is temptingly teasing...and I like that...very well written. U do have a real talent as a writer!!! Bravo!!!
ArtMan
Posted 31 Oct 2011 06:28
A great job of erotic writing!
hershey
Posted 30 Oct 2011 03:02
Simply beautiful...the seduction of being drawn into such a vivid and erotic scene was so real...thank you!

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crazydiamond
Posted 30 Oct 2011 02:51
So vivid! I can smell it! Excellent.
cocokisses
Posted 30 Oct 2011 00:27
Passionate and intoxicating. Nice work.
assloverxxx
Posted 30 Oct 2011 00:18
a real masterpiece of erotic passion and very well-written indeed
anarchy0029
Posted 30 Oct 2011 00:01
Beautiful Poem! Wow!

Jaymal
Posted 29 Oct 2011 22:04
Cunningly written, subtle and impressionistic. One of the best poems I've read here.
Alphamagus
Posted 29 Oct 2011 10:06
Excellent and evocative..
ArtAngel
Posted 29 Oct 2011 09:26
Downright intoxicating .. Loved it doll.. Xx
ibee
Posted 28 Oct 2011 09:01
Yes a quiver thru me,enjoyed it all.Thank You.

Frank_Lee
Posted 28 Oct 2011 05:16
what it's all about...poetry, love, sex, passion...everything. I bow to you astonished.
nazhinaz
Posted 27 Oct 2011 22:06
Wow; What a powerful poetic erotica you created. Surely coming out of your heart. It is rare to see erotic poem of such good poetic form and style. Keeping the form intact and yet bring out erotica so powerful; baby you marvelled. Greatly impressed by your poetic skills. Wish I could give more, but 5++++

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Navin
Posted 27 Oct 2011 16:14
wonderful use of language..evocative and exciting..write more soon please.
 

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