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Your glorious Surrender

I saw it in your eyes.
That worried moment when your will to resist,
And your desire to remain pure and untouched,
Began to crumble and fail.

You felt it happening, and you trembled in fear
As I slowly wove my web around you.
With each gentle caress and tender kiss,
Your longing grew, until, inevitably,
You surrendered your body to me.

In a last, desperate hope, your eyes pleaded with me!
Begging me to relent, and to somehow
Save you from the Fate I had wrought for you.

My beautiful, silly girl.
Did you believe I would offer you such sanctuary?
Of course, I did not.

I, who would give you anything,
Anything at all, Anything save that.
My love for you was to great to offer such surcease.
There would be no salvation from your longing.

And the last flickering bit of hope
That you might keep your innocence
Was drowned in the rising, unstoppable
Tide of arousal that had overwhelmed
Your silent pleas.

With each piece of clothing I removed
Your desire grew,
But even as gentle as I was,
You felt your innocence being torn away,
Leaving you exposed, Nude to me,
But also naked to those
Long cherished ideas
Of protecting
Your virginity.

Your breath caught in you throat
When first you saw my cock!
You feared it like a weapon,
But your hand reached out
And I could see your need
Was greater than your fear.
I did not need to nudge you onto your back.
You reclined of your own will
And drew me between your thighs.
Fear and excitement coursed through you
As my cock touched your wetness.

I held your hip and held your gaze
As I suddenly thrust into you!
There was the wince of pain,
And a sharp moan issued
From deep inside you

But then I pulled back
And I felt your hands
Holding me close.
Your legs caught mine
And drew me back into your
Welcoming embrace.

Soon your body was moving
In time with my own.
Our bodies found rhythm
In the chaos of lust.

You had become so wet,
And squeezed me so tight,
My body tensed, and you urged me on.
Wanting me to cum inside you.

Intoxicated by your arousal,
I plunged hard into your body!
Your moans were a symphony
Of desire and I became lost
In the magic of the theme.

In the great crescendo,
I filled you with my essence,
And it merged with your own.
From that moment on
I owned your innocence,
And you possessed my heart!

By Milik the Red
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Comments(28)

Makavelli
Posted 30 Oct 2012 15:40
Great job, Milik, I enjoyed reading this love poem! Thanks for sharing another great piece!

one_winged_angel
Posted 28 Oct 2012 05:13
Hot, sensual and emotionally charged. Amazing job on this one.
mickeyfinn1
Posted 24 Oct 2012 14:12
LOVED IT..............gets the imagination working!

stephanie
Posted 23 Oct 2012 08:38
Quite excellent! Beautifully drawn, rather gothic in parts, extremely erotic, (not always easy with poetry...) and, if voting were allowed, a CONSUMMATE 5!!!!

xx SF
Ginnifer
Posted 22 Oct 2012 21:58
Terrific read.
JessicaX
Posted 22 Oct 2012 21:40
What beautiful choices you made in writing. Thanks for sharing this with everyone.
Alphamagus
Posted 22 Oct 2012 19:21
That was just wonderful.
Kiki
Posted 22 Oct 2012 17:26
Holy Mac! That blew me away...! Thank you for sharing those first moments that can never be erased from the heart & soul...Magic as how it should be x
Sassygirl21
Posted 22 Oct 2012 16:26
Loved this immensely!
kay_s
Posted 22 Oct 2012 16:16
Beyond beautiful, words were expressed with intensity and true feelings.

Buz
Posted 22 Oct 2012 16:13
Damn Milik, this is really awesome!

Mazza
Posted 22 Oct 2012 16:08
Holy shit, Milik!!!

I've never been turned on by a poem before!! Superb, just superb...

trembles

tashitasha
Posted 22 Oct 2012 16:03
So intense and magical. Your poetry is so amazing Milik.

principessa
Posted 22 Oct 2012 15:55
So intense. Well done, Red.

ShyVixen
Posted 22 Oct 2012 15:44
I can't pick out which line touched me the most, they all did. Powerful, emotional, and simply beautiful.
Lisa
Posted 22 Oct 2012 15:41
That was beautifully done, Milik. The last two lines were my favourite.

Naughtygrl73
Posted 22 Oct 2012 00:44
I owned your innocence
You possessed my heart
Even if the rest of your Poem hadnt captured me those two lines alone would've stolen my heart.....Beautiful
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 21 Oct 2012 19:13
holy moly..... i am utterly breathless with wanting that moment all over again but at the hands of someone who treasures it this way...
bat
Posted 21 Oct 2012 16:28
Fantastic ! I get that "Tide of arousal" when I read your work ... Excellent emotions Don't ever stop

summerjones
Posted 21 Oct 2012 12:53
Well written and sexy, I so agree with you I love when bodies hit perfect rhythm for sure..
lucy65
Posted 21 Oct 2012 11:29
Beautiful. I wish I could remember my first time as being so passionate.

sweet_as_candy
Posted 21 Oct 2012 11:07
I was writing my comment and deleted it as I saw runnergirl say the same thing!! Yeah, what she said!!
WOW!! I will say it again, your writing ability is exquisite. You completely take the reader to the scene and make them feel every beautiful word you write! I am a huge fan of your work xx

Hotstuff
Posted 21 Oct 2012 08:47
Beautifully expressed and written..Thank you for sharing.

LatinSugar
Posted 21 Oct 2012 06:43
Lovely work, your words transport to that very intimate, innocent and most remembered moment. Goodness, magnificent piece.
Piquet
Posted 21 Oct 2012 05:26
A nicely woven web of words Milik. Beautifully done !
Kal-El85
Posted 21 Oct 2012 05:16
A piece filled with a plethora of emotions...I greatly enjoyed it.

She
Posted 21 Oct 2012 04:56
My favorite and for sure sexiest moments are when I am just about to surrender to my new lover. Powerful innocence of that moment is intoxicated and you expressed it perfectly.

Shylass
Posted 21 Oct 2012 04:54
What wonderful tension and joy! You captured the rolling emotions beautifully.
 

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