Join the best erotica focused adult social network now
Login
sdsioux
Over 90 days ago
Straight Male, 66
0 miles · Minneapolis
Forum
Advanced Wordsmith
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/straight-sex/-they-said-it-was-safe-to-swim-in-the.aspx
There is his link to his new story. Good for a third effort.
There is his link to his new story. Good for a third effort.
Advanced Wordsmith
Quote by icurOK2
I not only respond to comments, which are few, but I make an effort to read one of the commentator's stories, if the commentator is a writer. This has led me to read interesting work and make friends that are worth making. If a writer is too busy to acknowledge comments she/he shouldn't publish. There ims a process involved and the writer should conform to the process.
I do the same thing or used to anyway.
Advanced Wordsmith
Quote by Green_Man
You cannot post the link to your story here in the forum until you have 20 posts here. You need more posts.
Here is your story Hot Tub Swaps.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/wife-lovers/-hot-tub-swap-.aspx
I agree. I use nothing but third person. Solves the problem.
Advanced Wordsmith
I know you're wrong because you draw erroneous conclusions. If you get a prescription in the mail for your household for gonorrhea treatment what makes you automatically think someone in your house has contracted it? Maybe the wife did it for a friend so their family wasn't aware. Do you know what contempt prior to investigation means? Apparently not. The package delivery merely raised the question. In a 1000 word story, you need to do your own investigating. Making love in a field of poppies isn't erotic? The 100 words raise the questions about poppies including the lovemaking of two important poppy people. I'm wasting my time talking to a white wall. Keeping your mouth shut is the safest and communist way to handle things. I'll never voice my opinion again. Just follow the rules.
Advanced Wordsmith
Stieglitz is a famous American photographer and Gliere a 20th-century Russian composer. Both the poppy painting and the poppy ballet were published the same year. Coincidence? Stieglitz and O'Keeffe were married. It was inferred that I was a criminal by giving someone a disease. I said a testing kit arrived in the mail thus the conclusion contempt prior to investigation. Heh I did say I'll be a good boy and abide by the rules. Where does it say in the Lush manual that I have to like them?
Advanced Wordsmith
I want to thank nylon-punkie and annamarie 234 for their input in this matter. Recently I've had two rejected for reasons I disagree with. One had to do with the COVID Virus and the punchline in my story was that a person received a kit in the mail. It didn't say who it was for just that a package arrived.
Another had to do with the 100 word Poppy writing where I presented coincidences about the Poppy painting and Poppy classical piece. Apparently Stieglitz, O'Keeffe, and Gliere. are strange names to most of us. I won't print the 100-word story because I'll be banned forever because of it. I'm surprised the COVID didn't get me in trouble because it was inferred I was a criminal. In my defense, I changed the story and it was published. I am learning the rules of what not to do whether I agree or not. Keep your mouth shut and some thoughts to yourself.
In conclusion, no one reads my signature contempt prior to investigation which keeps a person in everlasting ignorance. Wrong buttons got pushed today! I only hope I'll be able to retrieve my mail as I have ongoing conversations.
SD Sioux
Another had to do with the 100 word Poppy writing where I presented coincidences about the Poppy painting and Poppy classical piece. Apparently Stieglitz, O'Keeffe, and Gliere. are strange names to most of us. I won't print the 100-word story because I'll be banned forever because of it. I'm surprised the COVID didn't get me in trouble because it was inferred I was a criminal. In my defense, I changed the story and it was published. I am learning the rules of what not to do whether I agree or not. Keep your mouth shut and some thoughts to yourself.
In conclusion, no one reads my signature contempt prior to investigation which keeps a person in everlasting ignorance. Wrong buttons got pushed today! I only hope I'll be able to retrieve my mail as I have ongoing conversations.
SD Sioux
Advanced Wordsmith
I don't vote or comment anymore on their writing. They do get a (+1) in the read. By commenting (with a positive one) I am endorsing it and some people may read it as a result. Voting, especially 5* could cause some people to read it with a high enough rating if most people rate it high enough. Ideally getting a perfect 5* rating without any comments would be the perfect situation. The rating system is a waste of time. Anything other than 5* is a waste of time. 4* is below average not good.
Advanced Wordsmith
Quote by Magical_felix
This implies that you're doing the author a favor by leaving a comment... It's like, well your story was a chore to get through so you really should thank me for finishing it and commenting because wowzers I almost jumped off my balcony from the boredom.
I'm glad you said IMPLY because you're wrong. Take a minute and read my signature. You fit it perfectly.
Advanced Wordsmith
I want to thank all of you for the feedback you've given on this subject. After reading all of them and putting aside the fact that maybe 1% comment I've decided to only comment if I want to take the time to respond. I assumed that being in the 1% entitled me to a response and I was wrong in that assumption. I should want to do it.