hi can a experienced writer please proof read and edit my story.

8 Sep 2014

My name is beckyone. I have 1 story published already but in terrible at grammar and am struggling to get someone to do this new story i have. Ill email you the story. Can anybody help please

10 Sep 2014

Hi becky. I took a cursory look at your story, and would like to tell you to quit worrying so much. Your prose is really not so bad as you think. You have a tendency to write run-on sentences, but that's far from being the biggest problem you, or any other writer on Lush, could have. Your prose is generally clear and easily readable, which puts you well ahead of the game already. Just keep writing and telling your stories. You're doing great so far. Your story looked completely filthy and obscene, and I mean that as a sincere compliment. Just have fun. Please. It's the only thing that matters.

11 Sep 2014

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My name is beckyone. I have 1 story published already but in terrible at grammar and am struggling to get someone to do this new story i have. Ill email you the story. Can anybody help please

Hi Becky,

I'll private message you. I know what it's like to be starting out as a writer that doesn't feel confident about grammar. It's great that you wish to improve.

Jayne x