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Need An Idea For A Second Chapter, Truth or Dare Goes Amiss
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How about Part 2: Bianca's trip to the doctor for treatment of extreme vaginal tears?
I know there is an element of fantasy to the stories, but come on. A virgin taking a twelve inch cock in one thrust? That's going to be painful for any woman, much less a virgin. You could even write about how she won't be able to have sex for a week or two while she heals.
I know there is an element of fantasy to the stories, but come on. A virgin taking a twelve inch cock in one thrust? That's going to be painful for any woman, much less a virgin. You could even write about how she won't be able to have sex for a week or two while she heals.
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Anybody have a suggestion for the second chapter of Truth or Dare Goes Amiss, a reluctance story?
Edit the first one first ..get rid of all the Ellipse and the dialogue should be separated by paragraphs. Each time a different character speaks, this should start a new paragraph, even if it is only a single word...
like this ..I added a bit of punctuation and spelling correction
Kate had a wicked grin on her face.
“I’ve got a dare, but you’ll never do it.” Bianca looked up, and asked what the dare was.
“Nahh, you’ll never do it.” Kate said.
“Yes I will.” Bianca pleaded.
“Whatever it is, I promise I will do it.” Kate laughed.
“You know you’re next door neighbor, Mr. Dudley?” Kate asked.
“Ummm yeah.” Bianca said, not quite knowing what Kate had up her sleeve.
“Well my brother is friends with Mr. Dudley’s son, and I hear tomorrow is his birthday.”
“So what?” Bianca asked.
“I dare you to go out on a date with Mr. Dudley tomorrow night, and do anything he asks.” Kate said.