so actually
I need suggestions on how to write a story that captures the attention of the female crowd?
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Why don't you submit this as a story? Then you'll get the feedback you want, just like everyone else does. If you're really unsure, find somebody to help you; you can use the same space you just used to post your story, and instead ask for help. I can just about guarantee somebody will volunteer. I'd consider changing the post to that, and removing the story from this space- it's not really what the forum is for.
Besides that, your paragraphs and spacing are in bad shape here- it makes it hard to read even if we want to.
Good luck!
Besides that, your paragraphs and spacing are in bad shape here- it makes it hard to read even if we want to.
Good luck!
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hmm yeah perhaps
and sorry about the paragraphs xD
I just copied and pasted from my word document.. they got messed up on here
sorry about it
and sorry about the paragraphs xD
I just copied and pasted from my word document.. they got messed up on here
sorry about it
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actually go ahead and close /lock it? thanks :\