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OK so I have read almost everything I could in the writers resources trying to better myself ( I have always wanted to be a writer since I read my first stephen king book) and I have finally just sat down and tried to write something. It isn't anything major but I think it is alot better than my previous work. I have sent it to my friends for their feedback but I would really like yours.

I almost forgot it is called vengeance and in the first time category. It is part one of a serial I plan on doing and Even though there is no vengeance in this story I plan on showing, by the end of it, why that is the title.
Hi OrionTat,

I'm just back from holiday, when I get a chance I'll take a look.

Anyone else read it and would like to comment?

Cheers,

~ Lush ~
Hey Orion....will check it out.
"Love all, trust a few, and do wrong to none."
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Hi OrionTat,

I'm just back from holiday, when I get a chance I'll take a look.

Anyone else read it and would like to comment?

Cheers,

~ Lush ~


Hope you had a relaxing holiday, Lush!

The Sultry Siren - my Wherefore Art Thou? competition story tells the tale of a man's obsession.

Thanks Tech, other than it raining on the last 2 days, it was perfect. I don't mind being cooped up indoors either if there's a comfy couch and some good books / company to be had.
It's always good to just get away from your environment for a while; very relaxing. Did you say you found both good company and good books?
I've been known to just go to the next city over and rent a suite for a weekend get away. It's nice to do something different once in awhile.