Well, i guess i need some help.

12 May 2009

Greetings friends;

I have read many good stories on this place and decided to write my own too. However I guess I am not that good with English, and have hard time trying to tell I what I want to. Like non-capital i's I guess. And maybe more.

So i would like to ask if someone could help me re-editing my first miserable trial on an erotic story and show me the way it should work. I just want to see the reaction of the people over the story. And I promise I won't write again if you dont like it biggrin

-oh i guess i forgat to mention that i posted it already, but it was removed due to some... mistakes. I would like to pm the story to the hero that accepts this painfull, grievious challange of correcting the chaotic soup of words that were supposed to be sentences... Well i guess you get the picture after this paragraph :D

help

12 May 2009

Send it to me, Arc, and I'll try my hand at correcting it. I'll only do it this once, though, ok?

12 May 2009

Well aren’t you nice Rocco. I can’t do anything for you Arconath (sorry) I probably need more help than you do… d'oh!

13 May 2009

Thanks rocco! Doing it once would be more than enough! I will keep the original as a referance to my mistakes - maybe this will help in the future. I guess I changed tenses too much.

Thanks for the support! Here i pm it to you, rocco!

15 May 2009

I have posted the story again. I would hereby like to thank Rocco, who read through the chaotic miscalculation of letters thrown together as words which in turn were arranged like and old lady's teeth and turned it into a story like beautiful young girl. For those of you out there who did not see the story, I believe the above sentence could give you a hint of my former writing "skillz"

Thank you, Rocco, and OOzimaraOO who also supported.

I hope you like it!