Put one of yours here...

6 Nov 2008

Quote by roccotool
Mumbles, with writing like that, she's gonna wear me out before I even get there...

You love it and you know it!!

Ruined By A Redhead - She told him she would ruin him; she kept her promise

Sunset Grill - Sometimes you find love where you least expect it

All My Love - Real love can last a lifetime and still feel brand new.

Tender Seduction - sometimes the long game pays off.

7 Nov 2008

Okay, don't laugh at me for this...

ECHO

My heart is just an echo
of another time and place.
I close my eyes and think of him,
try to see his face.

In my mind he's waiting
I fall into his arms.
I can no longer fight it,
I surrender to his warmth.

His eyes say to mine,
words he will not speak.
They fill my mind and suddenly
I feel my heart go weak.

My body begins to tremble
from his loving, gentle touch.
A touch I long for every night,
from a man I crave so much.

Once again I am alone,
as I awaken from my dreams.
My empty heart feels heavy inside,
like a bird without it's wings.

7 Nov 2008

Nice LB

7 Nov 2008

I had that feeling this summer LB. Never been away from her some much nor for so long at a time.

Very Nice

Bat

7 Nov 2008

That's a real nice poem, Birdie. Full of emotion.

7 Nov 2008

Thanks everyone. It's not exactly finished but it is a start, I guess... dontknow

7 Nov 2008

I like it very much..... hello2

"Love all, trust a few, and do wrong to none."

7 Nov 2008

Thanks Zaf! hello1

7 Nov 2008

Very good Birdie

7 Nov 2008

I liked it very much as well! Thanks for sharing it with us!

~~Tech

Ruined By A Redhead - She told him she would ruin him; she kept her promise

Sunset Grill - Sometimes you find love where you least expect it

All My Love - Real love can last a lifetime and still feel brand new.

Tender Seduction - sometimes the long game pays off.

8 Nov 2008

Very heartfelt Lil_Birdie.

Nobody is going to laugh at you, don't be afraid to write and submit anything in here icon_smile

8 Nov 2008

Thank you everyone!

8 Nov 2008

I found her smiling
When I reared my happy face
From between her thighs
I found her smiling
When, my tongue gliding upwards
I looked into her eyes
I found her smiling
A glazed look coming over her
And she came with such release
I found her smiling
When we kissed
She begged me continue with my feast

A bit rough, but I have this urge to eat breakfast. Gotta go!

8 Nov 2008

Smiles at the thought of what ASP had for breakfast!

Ruined By A Redhead - She told him she would ruin him; she kept her promise

Sunset Grill - Sometimes you find love where you least expect it

All My Love - Real love can last a lifetime and still feel brand new.

Tender Seduction - sometimes the long game pays off.

10 Nov 2008

Sounds like he already had the breakfast "juice". Meat will be cooking next.

10 Nov 2008

Quote by roccotool
Sounds like he already had the breakfast "juice". Meat will be cooking next.

oh so many comebacks....but so little time.... L16

Ruined By A Redhead - She told him she would ruin him; she kept her promise

Sunset Grill - Sometimes you find love where you least expect it

All My Love - Real love can last a lifetime and still feel brand new.

Tender Seduction - sometimes the long game pays off.

10 Nov 2008

I enjoy...

Kitty in the mornings.

11 Nov 2008

Darn, I set that joke up well, too.

18 Jan 2009

I don't know about everyone else but I am so ready for spring. Here's a new one I wrote hope you all like it.

Winter Cold

winter cold
chills me to
the bone

stuck inside
can not ride
wish the
cold would go

longing for
days gone by
warmer times
going on
a long
bike ride

several months
to go before
the cold will go

winter cold
chills me
to the bone

need to
ride to
stay warm

longing for
warm days
and cool nights

winter would
you please
go away?
give me
warm weather
anyday

18 Jan 2009

Man, that's cold.

But chilling to the bone.
Make for warm weather - it's coming.
Hang tough.

Bat

18 Jan 2009

Bat can't come fast enough for me

18 Jan 2009

Bikebum, this is for you:

'WINTER'

A poem by Abigail Elizabeth McIntyre

SHIT, It's Cold!

The End

Bat

18 Jan 2009

Right on Bat you couldn't have said it any better

18 Jan 2009

Bat can't come fast enough for me

I'll bet Batgirl says that all the time, huh, Bat?

20 Jan 2009

It would be nice for all the fighting to end if all people could get along as one I don't know why but I had to write this tonight after watching the news

Countries fight
through the day
through the night
why can't we
just get along?

throw the guns
down give up
the fight
live in peace

life is short
why do we have
to fight through
the day through
thr night?

do we know
why we fight?
can't we just
live together
instead of killing
each other?

instead of fihting through
the day and night
let us dance and sing
and enjoy life
why do we have to fight?

25 Jan 2009

Mentally Bent? You be the judge

Form the crazy biker Ride and be free icon_smile

Sitting at home
in my chair
warm in my chair
got up to
go for a ride
on my bike
in the cold winter air

cold at first
till the legs
but as i ride
and pedal the bike
i start to feel
alive.

the wind in
my face makes
my heart race
i feel so alive
and free on
my bike

getting cold
turning around
heading back home
is where i
will be found

back in my chair
i sit here and write
my bike is
put away for the night

till i feel blue again
i think i will stay in
warmed in my chair
i sip on my tea
so what do you think
am i mentally bent?

Let me know what ya'all think

25 Jan 2009

Nice post there BB. Short, descriptive lines help paint the picture.

Ruined By A Redhead - She told him she would ruin him; she kept her promise

Sunset Grill - Sometimes you find love where you least expect it

All My Love - Real love can last a lifetime and still feel brand new.

Tender Seduction - sometimes the long game pays off.

25 Jan 2009

Thanks Tech

8 Apr 2009

Okay, I'm going to be brave and put one here... never showed any of my work to anyone, so be nice... crybaby

YOU AND ME

Lying in a pool of tears I had cried
Knowing I had truly tried
But still wishing I had already died
That is where you found me

Still hurting, I went along
Expecting nothing more than the same old song
And in the end to be done wrong
Then to your heart you bound me

I still try to find the flaws
I know I should leave it, but at me it gnaws
Especially when you say you love me 'just because'
Your behavior confounds me

I can't see my life without you near
I believe in you and I want you to hear
That I love you and there's nothing you need to fear
Your arms I want wrapped around me

It came from out of the blue
These feelings I have so right, so new
I won't say it's perfect, but it's oh so true
With your love, you astound me

Be gentle dear readers...

Ling

8 Apr 2009

Ling that was very good