My stories need read. Go check them out and don't forget to vote.

1 Apr 2018

https://www.lushstories.com/jimwillhavefun/stories

These stories may not be perfect but they are fun to read. Please take a second and vote. I really want to hear your thoughts, good or bad, on them as well.

I am trying to improve my skills and need your help.

Thank you for helping me.

Remember to check out a few of my stories. You can find them here.

https://www.lushstories.com/profile/Jimwillhavefun/stories

For those who like a change and prefer something a little more PG, check out my stories on Storiespace.
https://www.storiesspace.com/profile/Jimwillhavefun/stories

1 Apr 2018

Is this some sort of April fools day joke?

The night that changed my life, a four part series of a married man lusting after his co-worker

[URL=http://www.lushstories.com/stories/reluctance/the-night-that-changed-my-life-1.aspx][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/WPPsy.jpg[/IMG][/URL]

1 Apr 2018

Quote by Dudealicious
Is this some sort of April fools day joke?

Why would this be a joke? I am asking for help and honest opinions on my writing. Isn't that what the forums are for?

Remember to check out a few of my stories. You can find them here.

https://www.lushstories.com/profile/Jimwillhavefun/stories

For those who like a change and prefer something a little more PG, check out my stories on Storiespace.
https://www.storiesspace.com/profile/Jimwillhavefun/stories

1 Apr 2018

Quote by Jimwillhavefun

Why would this be a joke? I am asking for help and honest opinions on my writing. Isn't that what the forums are for?

Mostly the title of your thread “my stories need read”. I would like to help however I see a vast majority of your stories are which I have no interest in whatsoever.

I wish you luck.

The night that changed my life, a four part series of a married man lusting after his co-worker

[URL=http://www.lushstories.com/stories/reluctance/the-night-that-changed-my-life-1.aspx][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/WPPsy.jpg[/IMG][/URL]

1 Apr 2018

Thanks for your honesty. I do have other ones in different categories. I am trying to see where I need improvement. But I understand if you don't want to read certain ones. Thanks for the help either way.

Remember to check out a few of my stories. You can find them here.

https://www.lushstories.com/profile/Jimwillhavefun/stories

For those who like a change and prefer something a little more PG, check out my stories on Storiespace.
https://www.storiesspace.com/profile/Jimwillhavefun/stories

2 Apr 2018

How about changing the title to something less grating grammatically, that's a start. Then maybe try writing in categories that aren't . Like Dudealicious said, I wish you luck.

Want to spend some time wallowing in a Recommended Read? Pick one! Or two! Or seven!

Drill Day - Tension
Double Oxer - Beribboned And Bowed - Blood Lust - Losing It - My Favourite Word

2 Apr 2018

The title of this thread so reminds me of Charlie Kelly from 'It's Always Sunny in Philadelphia'.