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EP award - You Would Do Well To Listen - elliotlacey31 - 23 Apr 2019

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You would do well to listen...

Well, I don't like it when people tell me what to do, so I almost didn't read this poem. lol

But it's Elliot fucking Lacey, I thought. There's got to be more to it.

Obviously, there is. It's like a whisper from somewhere bigger than you, bigger than everyone. It's not indignant, pouty, sad, or demanding, but just as powerful. Suddenly as you read, you recognize it as your own humanity, untainted by all the fear and uncertainty that gets in the way. It tells you to put all that down and listen, watch, feel. Soak everything in. It opens the door to everything you haven't seen of yourself and your partner and leaves you feeling vulnerable and exposed. But safe. If you've ever loved before or never loved before, this is the moment. This is what it is.
Huge congrats, Elliot! Your work is always wonderful, but this... Well, this is so wonderful, I don't have enough superlatives for it. You've outdone yourself.
Go Owly


I haven’t been here very long but I find it so exciting to know that I’m friends with the best poetry writer on Lush! I don’t know how you do it Elliot but you truly are amazing. Everything that you write is pure perfection! This poem should be read by every writer here so they’ll know that they need to step up and see their competition. You’ve set a new standard and it’s quite impressive ??
I can't thank all of you enough ❤️??❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️