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Poetry challenge: Use the last line first

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We've ever wished to be
Joined as one, my Love,
Beyond the physical boundaries
Fit together - as a glove.

Thoughts of one another
Cause our hearts to race
Counting every last second
Until we see each face

Wanting physical joining
To express our deepest thought
We lie together gently
In the wonderland we wrought.
In the wonderland we wrought
Cloistered by choice
Together, never apart.

Within its grace
We sing hearts songs
Soaring planted firmly aground.

What others may dream
What others may thirst
We are found and sated.

And in our wake
Like a shadow mist
Becomes a vision for them.
Becomes a vision for them,
That goal they reached as one;
Bathed in a warm golden light,
Memories washed by the sun.

But memories can fade away,
If not renewed at need;
So, Love, again let us share,
Our bonding, where'er it lead.

I want you with me throughout the day,
And then through the long night as well;
Never more than a heartbeat away,
For the future we can never tell.
For the future we can never tell
And could not, nor would not
Foresight making future past

Instead treasure unknown paths
Where every movement becomes the now
Making our memories more gold
Making our moments more golden
Is something I strive for
With people on lush
That touch my inner core

Through this world I do weave
As friends I gather alone the way
We laugh and parry and in return
All I ask is a smile and hopes
To brighten your day smile
Quote by Juli969
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Making our memories more gold


Quote by heidi
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Making our moments more golden


Heidi, please report for a spanking due to mangling Juli's last line.

Yours truly,
Lynn, the Police Dragon

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To brighten your day
I think we wish to do
With a few words
Or, perhaps, a rhyme or two

Maybe cause a wry smile
Or just an eye-roll
But spirits lifted
Is our ultimate goal

In the course
Of banter so shoved
You may find that
You really are loved
You really are loved
Did I get that right?
Sorry Juli, my brain said,
You don't have to use paste tonight


Even though tears
Lynn makes me smile
I'm sorry, I said
With a red bum smile smile
With a red bum smile
And a sigh born of new romance
It's not just physical
This sharing of desires and needs

We give what we take
Never able to give enough
Don't question why
Just keep it safe inside
"Just keep it safe inside"
Oh, with that I could run!
But, I will not go there
And have some different fun.

"Just keep it safe inside"
Your love is sheltered there.
Nurtured and returned
So never face despair.
[Sorry, Juli - I just can resist.....]


"Just keep it safe inside"
Where you placed it gently;
Holding it inside all day
Feeling it vibrate intensely.

The mobile app you have
Lets you send at any time
A control to weaken my knees
And cause feelings sublime!
And cause feelings sublime
Is what her heart desires
Oh if she could only grant that wish

So with a grin
She hit the app vibrate again
And sent her love once more

(right back at ya!)
And sent her love once more
Across the airwaves zinging
Delivered to 'the spot'
And set her soul to singing

Throughout the day she juddered
At some rather embarrassing times
But kept "it" safely hidden
Even though it rang her chimes

But thinking of revenge
She knew she'd have that night
As all the zings she'd gotten
She returned with all her might!

Exhausted and softly laughing
Upon the bed entwined
Kissing, caressing gently
Loving thoughts flow through each mind
Loving thoughts flow through each mind
Revenge was sweet
But so was that first zing
Delivered in secret

Slings and arrows
Of the lovers kind
Their war wages on
On ever expanding battleground
On ever expanding battleground
I do not wish to be
An escalating fight with you
Is not the thing for me
I'd rather take you out tonight
A dinnerdate for two
And then I'd take you to my bed
To make sweet love to you
A little kindness can be so valuable, yet costs almost nothing

In many countries being gay is a crime, and even in modern societies, politicians try to legalise discrimination. Your voice can make a difference. Have a look at All Out to find out how.


Hey... pssst.... that's an l (as in luscious) at the end of my name, not an i
To make sweet love to you
Each day our Valentines
Stripped down to basics
Just me and you

With eyes closed
And dreaming
Warmed by your body
Yours by mine

No chocolate hearts
Or fading flowers
Just the beating
Coming from the real
Coming from the real
owner of your heart
Words can make you whole
or tear your soul apart
Anyone can soothe you
or really tick you off
But the ones that hit the hardest are
the ones you really love
A little kindness can be so valuable, yet costs almost nothing

In many countries being gay is a crime, and even in modern societies, politicians try to legalise discrimination. Your voice can make a difference. Have a look at All Out to find out how.


Hey... pssst.... that's an l (as in luscious) at the end of my name, not an i
The ones you really love
Are always in your heart;
A thought away, so close,
Never will they depart.

Those thoughts may be intense,
Or bring a gentle glow;
No matter where we are,
They just affect us so.

Even never touching
In the physical world,
Imprints are left on us
As those sweet thoughts are swirled.

Onward let us journey;
Our universe sublime
Will hold us close, my Love:
I'm with you all the time.
I'm with you all the time
In the reality of my heart
The ocean's a mere puddle
And we're not far apart

I'm with you every day
In the reality of my dream
Where you are in my arms
Under the stars that gleam

I'm with you all my life
In the reality of my mind
Where thought can conquer distance
And words can truly bind
A little kindness can be so valuable, yet costs almost nothing

In many countries being gay is a crime, and even in modern societies, politicians try to legalise discrimination. Your voice can make a difference. Have a look at All Out to find out how.


Hey... pssst.... that's an l (as in luscious) at the end of my name, not an i
And words can truly bind
What ropes can only dream
Where chains rust and fail
And canvas splits at the seams

So be careful when you speak
Say those words with extra care
Don't dare to say always
When you only mean tonight
When you only mean tonight,
When you've spoken of forever,
The truth will soon appear,
Though you think you are quite clever.

But, perhaps, if only tonight,
Its depths we should plumb;
Stretch the hours with pleasure
Never wanting to be glum.

I'll pretend that it won't end,
As we merge ourselves to one;
Over and over again
In the ecstasy we have spun.
In the ecstasy we have spun
One night will be our forever
With passion's reign
Everything shall be gained
Until spent our dreams remain
in the ecstasy we have spun
my world was set alight
my dreams full of love
everything is gonna be alright

In the ecstasy we have spun
so much love you made me feel
all i can ever do is wonder
does this get any more real

in the ecstasy we have spun
in many darkened nights
will my love hold you forever
or will it fade with the coming lights

juli was faster sorry....

My Anti-Valentine Entry 💔

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/cheating/a-valentines-date-to-remember

My first EP and a top ten from the Pride Competition
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/lesbian/-love-is-love-.aspx

Hanging in the background but around

(Okay... let me try using the first line from BOTH...)

In the ecstasy we have spun,
Or will it fade with the coming lights,
Our journey to be forever?
Or over in just a few nights?

I want it to last a lifetime,
To know there will always be
Not two separate people
But the unity of "we".
But the unity of "we"
Spoken softly wrapped like a gift
That's cradled like a babe

Lesser words I have many
Fit to build only walls
When they should set us free

Save this one for me
Open only with care
Do not rush or risk its rip
Do not rush or risk its rip
When dealing with a heart
For a heart is very delicate
Not hard to tear apart
A little kindness can be so valuable, yet costs almost nothing

In many countries being gay is a crime, and even in modern societies, politicians try to legalise discrimination. Your voice can make a difference. Have a look at All Out to find out how.


Hey... pssst.... that's an l (as in luscious) at the end of my name, not an i
"Not hard to tear apart"
We know from lessons sad
Both those which we have given
And those which we have had

So let us be aware
Of those with whom we're dealing
And consider all our words
And often fragile feelings
And often fragile feelings
Hidden by hardened acts
Lost amid the fossils
That frame our broken shacks

Will you sense where borders
Become the very start
So dare those dark visages
Ignore the baying of the hounds

For fragile are the treasures
And high the price that's paid
It can't be gained in dollars
Your coinage outshines gold
Your coinage outshines gold
And with it you may buy
All my assets to hold
Let nothing now go awry

For investment is long term
As growing interest we share
Our portfolio we affirm
And face our future fair
And face our future fair
Gaze together into brightness
Like the kiss of sun upon us
Within it's warmth we glow

Tomorrow might be laden with folly
Or folly may come upon us now
It's a risk that carries only the burden
Of not taking the step upon the sand
Of not taking the step upon the sand
with moon and stars shining from high above
lost lovers who finally get to meet
risk taken to consummate their true love

A love so true and real
it's lasted through the miles
upon the sand he lays her
under the stars she smiles

My Anti-Valentine Entry 💔

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/cheating/a-valentines-date-to-remember

My first EP and a top ten from the Pride Competition
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/lesbian/-love-is-love-.aspx

Hanging in the background but around