i need help writing a story can you help?
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Dude...what kind of help do you need? Bear in mind this is an amateur site, designed for amateur writers to post their stories...nobody expects your first story to be Pulitzer prize material...
I've seen a lot of beginning writers ask for advice in the forums, people come along and give them all sorts of advice...they get so overwhelmed, they never actually write anything...
Believe me, seen it quite a few times in the last couple of years...
My advice...just write what you want to say the best you can, hit the "spell check" button on your word processor, copy the story and paste it in the "submit story" box here on Lush...
You'll learn far more by actually writing and posting than you ever could reading every advice column, blog and article on writing ever written...
Just my...
Good Luck...
Cheers,
Alan.
I've seen a lot of beginning writers ask for advice in the forums, people come along and give them all sorts of advice...they get so overwhelmed, they never actually write anything...
Believe me, seen it quite a few times in the last couple of years...
My advice...just write what you want to say the best you can, hit the "spell check" button on your word processor, copy the story and paste it in the "submit story" box here on Lush...
You'll learn far more by actually writing and posting than you ever could reading every advice column, blog and article on writing ever written...
Just my...
Good Luck...
Cheers,
Alan.
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Well said, thanks Alan.
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I have already written some but they keep getting rejected so any help would be great
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I have already written some but they keep getting rejected so any help would be great
Hey Adeleeve...today is your lucky day...I don't normally like to give advice, because after all...who am I? But, as someone who has managed to sneak about 104 or so stories and poems onto this fine site, I feel at least somewhat qualified...
First off, let me say that whenever a story gets rejected, the mods do give you some reason for the rejection...you will see that if read the rejection notice...
There are some common reasons why a story gets rejected, and I'll briefly touch upon the top three or so...
1. There are too many spelling and/or grammar errors. This is actually a fairly easy one. This whole story writing thing should not be rocket surgery, and I may butt heads with some other members who will tell you to have your story proofread by two other people, or whatever...but, I realize that is not always feasible, especially when a lot of people here would rather remain anonymous, and asking parents/teachers/friends to read a sex story they just wrote is not always a viable option...
What you can do, however, is run your story through a good word processor and hit the "spell and grammar check" button...it is usually something marked "abc" with a check through it...
If you don't have a good word processor on the computer you are using, just e-mail your story to yourself, and open up the doc at the local library on their computer...all the libraries have Word2007 on their computers these days, and that works just fine...
After you've done the check, just copy and paste the doc into the story submission form here at Lush, and that should do the trick...
2. Your story was rejected for ...Let's say that your main character is 15 years old in your story...simply change all the instances where it says "15" to "16" and re-submit it...
3. Your story got rejected because it involves drugging, forced sex, or some other "prohibited" act...this one can be a bit trickier. The easy answer would be to remove the drugging, , pillaging or whatever and re-submit it...but, if the whole story is built around an act that is prohibited here on this fine site known as Lush Stories, you just may be SOL...
For instance, I have a very fine story that got rejected by Lush back in '09...the tag line is "girls taken hostage videotaped for money"...
Will that story ever see the pages of Lush? Uh, no...but, I have come to accept that...
I hope this advice is of some help...
Good Luck,
Cheers,
Alan.
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