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How can I extend this poem to longform prose. Rate, review, and comment, Please!

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Just_A_Guy_You_Know
Wouldn't you rather have a nice cup of tea?
Don't use line breaks and write in paragraphs. Then write more.

Don't believe everything that you read.
Liz
Scarlet Seductress
An interesting piece, although I'm not sure how well this poem would lend itself to a more fleshed-out prose format.
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An interesting piece, although I'm not sure how well this poem would lend itself to a more fleshed-out prose format.


I'm sure we can figure it out. I kind of wrote it as a motivational primer anyway. It would be tough, but I am much more well read on deeper topics than when I wrote that 5 years ago. I have some great ideas, and welcome more from you, and others. I will definitely write a spiritual or/and actual sequel to it.
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Don't use line breaks and write in paragraphs. Then write more.



Thanks. Those are great suggestions. I probably should extend the poem to a longer length first and resubmit it somehow. Perhaps as an expanded sequel. I would love a comment and a score from you. Thanks.