Are they for lush? If so, I'm more than happy to look over anyone's stories and give them feedback.
I'm happy to act as a proof reader and constructive critic for stories too. I teach word processing and typos make me itch though, so you need to be aware that everything will come back effectively scrawled on with green pen ;)
Thanks to you both.
I will private message you for assistance.
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Please read my naughty new Micro.
~Famished~
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/microfiction/famished-1