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Looking for an editor for a wife lovers/hot wife story

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Hi.
Looking for some help editing a story. I cannot seem to get the dialogue correct.
Many thanks
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Quote by Darwen70
Hi.
Looking for some help editing a story. I cannot seem to get the dialogue correct.
Many thanks


You find someone? My offer is open.
kiteares
"the Great God (snicker)" - James 'Bear' Llewellyn
Quote by Darwen70
Hi.
Looking for some help editing a story. I cannot seem to get the dialogue correct.
Many thanks

If Robert or others don't work out, I've a little experience with dialogue, so feel free to fire it my way and I'll have a look over it for you.

Kite's Kinky Tales

My latest offering -

Once more in Love Poems - My Forever Beauty

My 2 previous submissions:

Both Love Poems

Pearls

As The New Year Dawns

Please read and enjoy. If you really enjoyed a story someone has written; how about clicking on 'Like' and/or 'Favorite'.
Why not leave a comment too?
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Back OFF!!!

She’s mine, boys.
Blueexx
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Hey Robert when's the next chapter?
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Hey Robert when's the next chapter?


I have no idea. Got quite a bit done, but had a bit of a family emergency come up and gonna be gone next couple weeks. Been playing with it the last few days, but has come to a temporary screeching halt.

BTW, thanks for asking
kiteares
"the Great God (snicker)" - James 'Bear' Llewellyn
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Back OFF!!!

She’s mine, boys.




Does she know what she's let herself in for?

Kite's Kinky Tales

My latest offering -

Once more in Love Poems - My Forever Beauty

My 2 previous submissions:

Both Love Poems

Pearls

As The New Year Dawns

Please read and enjoy. If you really enjoyed a story someone has written; how about clicking on 'Like' and/or 'Favorite'.
Why not leave a comment too?
stupid2
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Having read your first story, would love to help you out. steve