Hello everyone,
I’m looking for a few thoughtful readers willing to be beta readers for my short erotica stories before I release them here. My aim is to polish each piece so it’s not only sexy, but also engaging and satisfying as a story.
What I’d ask from you: honest, constructive feedback about pacing, characters, tone, and how the erotic elements land. I’m not looking for just “I liked it” or “That was hot,” but rather where things pulled you in, where they didn’t, and how the story felt overall. Don’t worry, you don’t need to be a professional editor, just a reader willing to share your reactions.
What you can expect from me: gratitude, openness to feedback, and respect for your time. I’ll send you a story (or part of one) along with a short set of guiding questions, and I welcome both short notes and longer, detailed responses.
If you enjoy reading erotica, have an eye for detail, and want to help shape a story before it’s published, I’d love to hear from you. Please reply here or send me a message if you’re interested.
Thank you for considering it. I can’t wait to share my work with you and hear your thoughts!
Stories currently available for beta reading.
He Touched Me First: He touched me first. I decided how far it went. Genre: (Public Transportation). Word Count: Roughly 1.2K.
Tending the Garden: Some things grow wild when left unattended—and some are chosen that way. Genre: Wife Lovers (Pregnant). Word Count: Roughly 4.2K.
Sunday Afternoon: A quiet Sunday. A public place. And one stranger who didn’t look away. Genre: Exhibitionism. Word Count: Roughly 3K.
If you're interested, message here or send me a PM. Tell me which story and I'll send you a link to a google doc with the story followed by a series of questions. Thank you for your valuable time.
—Evo
