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16 May 2013

Hi all, i have written and submitted my first ever story but unfortunately it was rejected due to lack of grammar and punctuation. crybaby

Could someone proof read it and give me some advice please?

16 May 2013

Hi there,

Just thought I would link the thread that One Winged Angel started. There are some excellent tips and support guidelines for you to follow to improve your writing technique smile

Good luck

http://www.lushstories.com/forum/yaf_postst29354_Tips-for-dealing-with-a-rejected-story.aspx

16 May 2013

Thanks for your reply Candy, will have a look smile

16 May 2013

I went to try edit my story but can't, this message shows up

16 May 2013

Quote by DikDango
Quote so this appears in your timeline.

That's because you have submitted it already. Want me to reject it so you can edit it?

16 May 2013

Please Clum, that would be great

16 May 2013

OWA beat me to it.

21 May 2013

A drunken post